One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Sally Carter
I love this poem, which touched me greatly. For reasons I won't elaborate on, I want/need to live as long as possible right now, to support a much loved person who is going through challenging times. This one's a keeper that I might share with her at the right time. Thank you. x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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I love this poem, which touched me greatly. For reasons I won't elaborate on, I want/need to live as long as possible right now, to support a much loved person who is going through challenging times. This one's a keeper that I might share with her at the right time. Thank you. x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words.
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Comment from June Sargent
I loved the way you highlighted the positive aspect of death. We are dust and to dust we will return. But we are also of the earth and all that this planet encompasses. The air, the land, the sea. We are one and never far away. The colorful presentation added to the lovely imagery.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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I loved the way you highlighted the positive aspect of death. We are dust and to dust we will return. But we are also of the earth and all that this planet encompasses. The air, the land, the sea. We are one and never far away. The colorful presentation added to the lovely imagery.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, June. Yes, you got the meaning. I always appreciate your time and kind words. Thank you very much for the exceptional review and six stars.
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Comment from Mark Schardine
A perfect poem to share with loved ones, to remind them how we will never let them down. Regardless of what may happen, we remain at their sides. and do so gladly.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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A perfect poem to share with loved ones, to remind them how we will never let them down. Regardless of what may happen, we remain at their sides. and do so gladly.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Mark. I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars.
Gypsy
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy rose,
Thank you for this very touching poem. I would like your permission to send it to some of my nieces and nephews, so they can remember me in such a beautiful, poignant way. If you give me permission, I will make sure to send it to them as is, making sure they know you are the author.
Awesome layout and lettering too.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Gypsy rose,
Thank you for this very touching poem. I would like your permission to send it to some of my nieces and nephews, so they can remember me in such a beautiful, poignant way. If you give me permission, I will make sure to send it to them as is, making sure they know you are the author.
Awesome layout and lettering too.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Yes, of course, you may send my poem to your nieces and nephews.. it's an honor. Thank you, Cindy. I appreciate your review. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Thank you, Gypsy.
Have a nice weekend.
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Comment from Gloria ....
I absolutely love your free verse poem here. There is no need to repeat those sections I like best, because that would be all of them.
Grieving is a life-long process and hearing, seeing, sensing the loved one all around in nature is healing.
Very much enjoyed this one. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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I absolutely love your free verse poem here. There is no need to repeat those sections I like best, because that would be all of them.
Grieving is a life-long process and hearing, seeing, sensing the loved one all around in nature is healing.
Very much enjoyed this one. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Gloria. I appreciate your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a beautifully written poem. So enjoyable to read. Your writing has a light, airy quality to me. The presentation adds dimension to your words and pulled me in. My father died 20 years ago and I can still feel his presence with me.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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What a beautifully written poem. So enjoyable to read. Your writing has a light, airy quality to me. The presentation adds dimension to your words and pulled me in. My father died 20 years ago and I can still feel his presence with me.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Yes, I know he is part of you. Thank you, KL. I appreciate your review. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You stepped out of your comfort zone here to write these words and I adored the sentiments as we live on in among the flowers, in our children's eyes and in the breeze, a sweet natured write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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You stepped out of your comfort zone here to write these words and I adored the sentiments as we live on in among the flowers, in our children's eyes and in the breeze, a sweet natured write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate your review. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from karenina
This is exquisite, Gypsy! Every word is a healing balm to the grieving heart...
I must have read this five times, blinking back tears...moved to my very core.
For all of those I have lived and lost...for those who will one day find me slipped from their grasp..
This....
This is the message I want to wrap all of our hearts in!
Perfection in free verse!
Bravo!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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This is exquisite, Gypsy! Every word is a healing balm to the grieving heart...
I must have read this five times, blinking back tears...moved to my very core.
For all of those I have lived and lost...for those who will one day find me slipped from their grasp..
This....
This is the message I want to wrap all of our hearts in!
Perfection in free verse!
Bravo!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Karenina. I appreciate your exceptional review, six stars, and kind feedback. It's always good to hear from you :)
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Such a lovely poem!
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful gentle poem, Gypsy. This demonstrates that free verse can be lyrical. You write about the continuing spirit with tranquil confidence using gorgeous imagery. This would have been an excellent entry for the faith contest.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Beautiful gentle poem, Gypsy. This demonstrates that free verse can be lyrical. You write about the continuing spirit with tranquil confidence using gorgeous imagery. This would have been an excellent entry for the faith contest.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Julia. I appreciate your exceptional review and kind feedback. It's always good to hear from you :)
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Comment from kahpot
How beautiful, the message you have left your loved one's is so very reassuring that you will always love them and will continue to be there, your children and grand children will always show a piece of you and keep memories alive, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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How beautiful, the message you have left your loved one's is so very reassuring that you will always love them and will continue to be there, your children and grand children will always show a piece of you and keep memories alive, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Kym.
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Kym.
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