"The Gift of Life."
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Tragic story. Hope it helps ease the pain expressing the events of that night. I've been through Manahawkin on the way to the shore. At first, I thought it was Manasquan. I lived in Trenton.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Tragic story. Hope it helps ease the pain expressing the events of that night. I've been through Manahawkin on the way to the shore. At first, I thought it was Manasquan. I lived in Trenton.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your review and time and comments.
I have lived in Tuckerton now and not Manahawkin for about 2 years.
It's not because of the bad memories.
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Comment from F. William Lester
So sad. It's why we always worry about our children. A wrong decision and we shoulder the tragedy of their leaving us for the rest of our lives. My deepest sympathy. I will keep Jason in my thoughts.
Since part of our reading each other's writing is to help each other improve, the sixth line in the stanza beginning 'Now, hold on Tight!', you wrote "Qnd". I think you mean "And".
Nice work. Thanks for sharing your story. Stay well.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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So sad. It's why we always worry about our children. A wrong decision and we shoulder the tragedy of their leaving us for the rest of our lives. My deepest sympathy. I will keep Jason in my thoughts.
Since part of our reading each other's writing is to help each other improve, the sixth line in the stanza beginning 'Now, hold on Tight!', you wrote "Qnd". I think you mean "And".
Nice work. Thanks for sharing your story. Stay well.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your time review and Grammar errors.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sharing life, our thoughts, dreams and sorrows can indeed help us to cope with life and appreciate the good times and be relieved of the grief when sorrow knocks our door, a poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Sharing life, our thoughts, dreams and sorrows can indeed help us to cope with life and appreciate the good times and be relieved of the grief when sorrow knocks our door, a poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Always a pleasure to see you revealing my work and for me to review yours Dolly.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Mickamus J
Thank you for sharing. The pain and memory will remain but in the end, it is the love shared that burns in recognition of life's fragility and how we should choose our friends wisely. They are after all signboards to our sadness and pain and in some cases, death. It is a memory that stains, that does not allow for erasure (of course, not)
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you for sharing. The pain and memory will remain but in the end, it is the love shared that burns in recognition of life's fragility and how we should choose our friends wisely. They are after all signboards to our sadness and pain and in some cases, death. It is a memory that stains, that does not allow for erasure (of course, not)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Your words ring very true and you're very wise and thanks so much for stopping by and reviewing.
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Comment from Teri7
I am so sorry that this happened. I can understand Sp how you feel. My only sister died from a tragic injury in her bedroom on March 3 and we buried her on March 5th. May God bless you my friend and comfort you by His Holy Spirit. Prayers, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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I am so sorry that this happened. I can understand Sp how you feel. My only sister died from a tragic injury in her bedroom on March 3 and we buried her on March 5th. May God bless you my friend and comfort you by His Holy Spirit. Prayers, Teri
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Teri for stopping by and my deepest condolences on your recent loss.
I hope she's feeling much better where she's at and she's no longer in pain.
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