Puck Ugly
a limerick8 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The rules of a goalie: The goalkeeper should be cool and not get rattled if a goal is made by the opposing side; They should be the quickest person on the team over five yards; The goalie should be a quick decision-maker; They must always be watching the ball; Above all, the goalkeeper should have courage. They should not step back from any ball, afraid to stop it
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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The rules of a goalie: The goalkeeper should be cool and not get rattled if a goal is made by the opposing side; They should be the quickest person on the team over five yards; The goalie should be a quick decision-maker; They must always be watching the ball; Above all, the goalkeeper should have courage. They should not step back from any ball, afraid to stop it
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Something soccer has in common with hockey.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hah hah hah.. excellent entry for the Write a Limerick writing prompt contest. You did a great job with the Limerick form. The rhymes don't seem forced. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Hah hah hah.. excellent entry for the Write a Limerick writing prompt contest. You did a great job with the Limerick form. The rhymes don't seem forced. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you, GBR
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written Limerick poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your last line was clever. Great rhyming throughout this poem. Your syllable count is on point. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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This is a well written Limerick poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your last line was clever. Great rhyming throughout this poem. Your syllable count is on point. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thanks, 777
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You're welcome.
Comment from royowen
You've written a super Limerick, these limericks are flying around all over the place these days my friend, great rhythm and a super flow, and that great, flippant humour of these traditional stylish work. Great job, in the classical style, 99669 syllable count, well done, blessings and good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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You've written a super Limerick, these limericks are flying around all over the place these days my friend, great rhythm and a super flow, and that great, flippant humour of these traditional stylish work. Great job, in the classical style, 99669 syllable count, well done, blessings and good luck, Roy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Roy
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Most welcome
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Welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A well metered and rhymed Limerick. I have no idea what "hawkey" means and I tried looking that word up but came up with nothing. Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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A well metered and rhymed Limerick. I have no idea what "hawkey" means and I tried looking that word up but came up with nothing. Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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A regional pronunciation of the word hockey.
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Thanks for explaining x x x
Comment from Eternal Muse
I loved this. It had a perfect inflection, or beat - which is very hard to achieve in limericks. The other day I was reading all the entries for the last limerick contest, and only one entry had the right inflection!
It was a real treat for me. Great imagery, visuals, humor, presentation, it should be the top contender, good luck in the contest. Loved your fun spelling of "hawkey"!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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I loved this. It had a perfect inflection, or beat - which is very hard to achieve in limericks. The other day I was reading all the entries for the last limerick contest, and only one entry had the right inflection!
It was a real treat for me. Great imagery, visuals, humor, presentation, it should be the top contender, good luck in the contest. Loved your fun spelling of "hawkey"!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thanks, EM
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That's a little cold for the exceptional review (lol).
Comment from papa55mike
Minor league hockey is a world unto itself. Being a Dayton Gem for many years until I moved to Tennessee. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the Milwaukee accent.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Minor league hockey is a world unto itself. Being a Dayton Gem for many years until I moved to Tennessee. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the Milwaukee accent.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Mike, for the exceptional review.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This was a great pirate story. It was cute. I like the picture. You put together a different rhyme and worked out perfect. Thank you for the great post. Have a great morning.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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This was a great pirate story. It was cute. I like the picture. You put together a different rhyme and worked out perfect. Thank you for the great post. Have a great morning.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Carolyn
