Heart pains
Yet again ...11 total reviews
Comment from Terry Palardy
I agree. 'Nations also experience such attacks' is a truth worth shouting. Our nation today is suffering an increase of mental health issues due to the external and internal battles we face each day when listening to the news. Thank you for using this prompt to say loud and proud that we are not bigger than this issue, and that we need to take care of all we can.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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I agree. 'Nations also experience such attacks' is a truth worth shouting. Our nation today is suffering an increase of mental health issues due to the external and internal battles we face each day when listening to the news. Thank you for using this prompt to say loud and proud that we are not bigger than this issue, and that we need to take care of all we can.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for reviewing Terry. Yes, it can be applied to the US as well, although my primary thought was for the people of Ukraine. Many layers of relevance. I appreciate your insights.
Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest.. good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent message about the war.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest.. good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent message about the war.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you Gypsy. Much appreciated!
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write about the attack on Ukraine and how the world has reacted to this invasion. It is as personal as a heart attack and hopefully it will be all over soon, but the aftermath will most certainly mean that Ukraine will fall to the Russian mighty rule, we need to fear the spread, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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A poignant write about the attack on Ukraine and how the world has reacted to this invasion. It is as personal as a heart attack and hopefully it will be all over soon, but the aftermath will most certainly mean that Ukraine will fall to the Russian mighty rule, we need to fear the spread, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Dolly for your fine review. Appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Heart Pains, has the right setup and refers to the horrors of the unwarranted attack by Russia on their neighbor and free republic of Ukraine. Heart attack for sure.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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This 2-4-2, Heart Pains, has the right setup and refers to the horrors of the unwarranted attack by Russia on their neighbor and free republic of Ukraine. Heart attack for sure.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your understanding of this short poem of support for the Ukrainian people. I appreciate it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Using only these eight mere required syllables, you have movingly touched on an issue that goes to the hearts of caring people throughout the world!
I'm so glad about the widespread efforts to help.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Using only these eight mere required syllables, you have movingly touched on an issue that goes to the hearts of caring people throughout the world!
I'm so glad about the widespread efforts to help.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Janice. I greatly appreciate your words.
Comment from Mia Twysted
There is so much hatred and evil in the world. It seems we are doomed to repeat the past because we have not learned from it. We should be standing together and holding up our fellow humans not tearing them down.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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There is so much hatred and evil in the world. It seems we are doomed to repeat the past because we have not learned from it. We should be standing together and holding up our fellow humans not tearing them down.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you Mia. A very understanding review. You are exactly right. Man has not learned from the past and its suffering, nor has he learned to control his greed.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
War can cause much stress. A task force on war-related stress was convened to develop strategies for prevention and treatment of psychological, psychosocial, and psychosomatic disorders. Stress can cause heart attacks.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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War can cause much stress. A task force on war-related stress was convened to develop strategies for prevention and treatment of psychological, psychosocial, and psychosomatic disorders. Stress can cause heart attacks.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Rosemary for your very encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from rspoet
This an excellent 2-4-2 poem for the contest
Yes, pain of all sorts will come from this unprovoked attack
on a peaceful country.
Nice color choice to match the flag.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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This an excellent 2-4-2 poem for the contest
Yes, pain of all sorts will come from this unprovoked attack
on a peaceful country.
Nice color choice to match the flag.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you Robert I greatly appreciate your review and encouragement.
Comment from kahpot
This (obviously) came straight from the heart, an excellent short work with words that many will relate to and feel, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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This (obviously) came straight from the heart, an excellent short work with words that many will relate to and feel, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Kahpot for your excellent review. Greatly appreciated.
Comment from T B Botts
Who, having a heart, isn't feeling the anguish of the people of Ukraine right now? How one person can single-handedly create so much trouble for not only the Ukrainians, but the rest of the world as well, is beyond comprehension. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Who, having a heart, isn't feeling the anguish of the people of Ukraine right now? How one person can single-handedly create so much trouble for not only the Ukrainians, but the rest of the world as well, is beyond comprehension. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Tom! I appreciate your understanding and caring review.