Disappointment
Boy dropped his ice cream cone.5 total reviews
Comment from Rena Smith
I like this poem because it's a sweet poem about an upset child and it's genuineness and simplicity makes it a steal. The simplest little things make them cry and the smallest acts of kindness makes them happy. We as adults need to learn from them. I like this poem because of its simplicity.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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I like this poem because it's a sweet poem about an upset child and it's genuineness and simplicity makes it a steal. The simplest little things make them cry and the smallest acts of kindness makes them happy. We as adults need to learn from them. I like this poem because of its simplicity.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging feedback.
Comment from Jennifer Keeley
Nice job. It was simple, got to the point, and the picture tied it all together. While I read this I guess I was focusing more in the picture because what I thought I read was: I screamed.
Your title was also very appropriate.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Nice job. It was simple, got to the point, and the picture tied it all together. While I read this I guess I was focusing more in the picture because what I thought I read was: I screamed.
Your title was also very appropriate.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the read and the review. What do you think would have made it a five star offering?
Comment from rspoet
This is a very good 2-4-2 poem for the contest.
I'd be crying too (or worse) if I dropped my ice cream cone in the sand.
I like the way each line ends in a word starting with "c".
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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This is a very good 2-4-2 poem for the contest.
I'd be crying too (or worse) if I dropped my ice cream cone in the sand.
I like the way each line ends in a word starting with "c".
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from jessizero
Cute, and the picture fits perfectly. I know it's hard to tell a story in those few syllables, but you managed to do it! Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Cute, and the picture fits perfectly. I know it's hard to tell a story in those few syllables, but you managed to do it! Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Love the picture and the words you have used to describe it. I am sure all of us can remember the anticipation of holding that ice cream cone and taking the first taste, only to drop it on the ground. That is a great disappointment.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Love the picture and the words you have used to describe it. I am sure all of us can remember the anticipation of holding that ice cream cone and taking the first taste, only to drop it on the ground. That is a great disappointment.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I remember licking the scoop and it dropped out of the cone.
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You are welcome