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Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Well great job thanks for sharing keep up the good work I wish you well and everything you do I enjoyed the read thanks again for sharing stay inspired and focused keep up the good work
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Well great job thanks for sharing keep up the good work I wish you well and everything you do I enjoyed the read thanks again for sharing stay inspired and focused keep up the good work
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the praising review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you want to read previous chapters just go to my portfolio. There us no need to write any reviews. Just enjoy it like you would a book. It is about a trip to Glastonbury England that I took with 2 other friends. We had quite the experiences. I've captured most, plus a fictional spin on it. I tell the reader, fortunately, this did not happen. That comes up in a couple of chapters. If you are interested in power spots in an area, you will enjoy those previous chapters.
Comment from Leann DS
Your chapter was great! You provided a lot of visual imagery so I could picture the scene, and the factual details were helpful as well. I was engaged from start to finish. I'm going to have to go back and read some previous chapters. I've been out of the fan story loop for several months, and just recently came back. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Your chapter was great! You provided a lot of visual imagery so I could picture the scene, and the factual details were helpful as well. I was engaged from start to finish. I'm going to have to go back and read some previous chapters. I've been out of the fan story loop for several months, and just recently came back. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the praising review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you want to read previous chapters just go to my portfolio. There us no need to write any reviews. Just enjoy it like you would a book. It is about a trip to Glastonbury England that I took with 2 other friends. We had quite the experiences. I've captured most, plus a fictional spin on it. I tell the reader, fortunately, this did not happen. That comes up in a couple of chapters. If you are interested in power spots in an area, you will enjoy those previous chapters.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I've just told my husband about your experiences, and having a weird brain, I said he had to take me there!! Our sons used to go to the Glastonby music festivals in their teens. It wasn't anything I'm interested in, but I do like going to these ancient places and there are many around where we live. This was really interesting, Judy, and I can't wait to read on. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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I've just told my husband about your experiences, and having a weird brain, I said he had to take me there!! Our sons used to go to the Glastonby music festivals in their teens. It wasn't anything I'm interested in, but I do like going to these ancient places and there are many around where we live. This was really interesting, Judy, and I can't wait to read on. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. Where do you live? That sounds cool.
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Hampshire, we are near Stonehenge, and many other ironage villages, that have been found and marked out. Of course, there are loads more in Cornwall, where we go to a lot. But now I've read this, I'll be going to Glastonbury in a few weeks time. I love anything like this. Just the sense of time is interesting. You can feel it.
In Winchester we have the round table, belonging to King Alfred, and so much more. England has so much to offer being steeped in history. I just noticed I called you Judy! Sorry about that. It's an age thing!! Lol. I'm steeped in history too!! xx
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I can't imagine in that energy all of the time: "Just the sense of time is interesting. You can feel it." So just keep going north & you'll get to the stone circle and Silbury Hill & think of how that whole area is mirrored on Mars.
I'll be interested how Glastonbury strikes you. There's a gross concept there that we did not go near. It is supposed to be some special well of RED...blood red water....eeek. It's supposed to be a healing. You can check that out. The stuff about what happened there is coming up in the next chapter. You'll really be ready for your trip then. Hopefully, you weren't there in a past life. It will be gentler on you. Have you ever seen a UFO? I've called them out but never have seen one. My mother did when she was little, in the early 1900's & some of the Sisters did.They even fetched the sketptical one to really validate it for everyone. But we did get to see & walking the crop circle a little ways up from Stonehenge. So cool. I had called that out from my home in the US
Well, that's enough for now.
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No, I haven't seen a UFO, I'd love to, though. And I'd love to see a ghost. Told you I'm weird!! LOL. I'll be looking for your next chapter. xxx
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I don't see ghosts, I just sense the trapped spirits. They nudge me to set them free.
Comment from lyenochka
It's good that Madeline is capable at dowsing. I wonder what it is that they are seeing. Some spirit beings? It seems the whole town has been affected by this. It's good that these four ladies are so spiritually compatible and can help each other.
Suggestions:
"Oh, that right, Madeline, (that's)
Everyone one of them." (Every one of them)
from it."Oh no." (it. Oh, no."
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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It's good that Madeline is capable at dowsing. I wonder what it is that they are seeing. Some spirit beings? It seems the whole town has been affected by this. It's good that these four ladies are so spiritually compatible and can help each other.
Suggestions:
"Oh, that right, Madeline, (that's)
Everyone one of them." (Every one of them)
from it."Oh no." (it. Oh, no."
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your great review. Your observations were helpful, too.
Comment from aryr
This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. It was truly interesting that the ladies had no trouble discussing their feelings at any time. Madeline, Cornelia, Karin and Cyndy, which was great. That is how we learn from each other. Unfortunately they are now under the influences of the Michael Line and thus suffered great darkness and negativity. Then they see the sign that meant they had to turn around and face the darkness. Very well done, greatly enjoyed.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. It was truly interesting that the ladies had no trouble discussing their feelings at any time. Madeline, Cornelia, Karin and Cyndy, which was great. That is how we learn from each other. Unfortunately they are now under the influences of the Michael Line and thus suffered great darkness and negativity. Then they see the sign that meant they had to turn around and face the darkness. Very well done, greatly enjoyed.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. It is so good to find a believer. One reviewer, who writes science fiction though I was writing science fiction. I told her these things happened like this as have all other things on here so far. I will deviate into my imagination in the next chapter. But I think you will enjoy it.
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You are so welcome, Liz. You are among the few writers who truly share their knowledge.
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***warm smile***
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a rather chilling chapter, Liz. I think I'd be panicking about now, seeing all those strange and colourful people. I don't think I'll put that place on my wish list of places to see! You've done a great job of writing about it though.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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This is a rather chilling chapter, Liz. I think I'd be panicking about now, seeing all those strange and colourful people. I don't think I'll put that place on my wish list of places to see! You've done a great job of writing about it though.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad it is impacting you the way intended.
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You are most welcome, Liz. It is such an interesting tale.
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I just heard it is another beautiful Pisces birthday. Happy birthday, Judy, one of my favorite writers.
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Thanks so much, Liz! I've never had so many friends before I joined FanStory. :)
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***warm smile***
Comment from country ranch writer
I had never heard of this harp therapy but I do know music will calm the soul marking folks relax and not be afraid. Like therapy dogs calm soldiers Shen they are anxious.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I had never heard of this harp therapy but I do know music will calm the soul marking folks relax and not be afraid. Like therapy dogs calm soldiers Shen they are anxious.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. When I experienced it, it occurred to me why Beethoven's music depresses me. It must be the chords he used.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm not sure I can suspend my disbelief with your extreme explanation of the weirdness of the people of Glastonbury. And they might be a little insulted. You seem to have gone a little science fictiony.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I'm not sure I can suspend my disbelief with your extreme explanation of the weirdness of the people of Glastonbury. And they might be a little insulted. You seem to have gone a little science fictiony.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. This is just the way the 3 of us in real life experienced it & when I later interviewed some of the participants. It really happened as did all of these events 'til the next chapter, where I finally deviate into my imagination. .
Comment from papa55mike
I always find it amazing how the forces of darkness use every power available to distort the vision of good people. Please check this line; I did notice (how) many similar responses. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I always find it amazing how the forces of darkness use every power available to distort the vision of good people. Please check this line; I did notice (how) many similar responses. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. It is so good to find a believer. One reviewer, who writes science fiction though I was writing science fiction. I told her these things happened like this as have all other things on here so far. I will deviate into my imagination in the next chapter. But I think you will see where it is going. Cool.
Comment from prettybluebirds
It seems that you have led a rather interesting life thus far. These stories you tell have me fascinated and intrigued. Your dialogue is marvelous and makes the story a joy to read. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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It seems that you have led a rather interesting life thus far. These stories you tell have me fascinated and intrigued. Your dialogue is marvelous and makes the story a joy to read. Nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. It is so good to find a believer. these things happened like this as have all other things on here so far. I will deviate into my imagination in the next chapter. But I think you will enjoy it. Cool.