God On Divine Activities
One Sentence 33 Word Non-Fiction Contest; What does God40 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-three-word spiritual story, God on Divine Activities, has the proper word count and follows the other rules. God is definitely all the things stated here.
I would change the comma after "unique" to a semicolon as well.
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This thirty-three-word spiritual story, God on Divine Activities, has the proper word count and follows the other rules. God is definitely all the things stated here.
I would change the comma after "unique" to a semicolon as well.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Exceptional piece for the 33 Word Spiritual Non-Fiction writing prompt with the best of wishes in the contest my friend! You shared to the contest rules and did an awesome job!
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family!
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Exceptional piece for the 33 Word Spiritual Non-Fiction writing prompt with the best of wishes in the contest my friend! You shared to the contest rules and did an awesome job!
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is great and true. God is the almighty. He has given us everything we need to make a living. He gave us hands to make beautiful things. He gave us feet to walk. I could go on and on. Thank you for such a lovely poem.
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This is great and true. God is the almighty. He has given us everything we need to make a living. He gave us hands to make beautiful things. He gave us feet to walk. I could go on and on. Thank you for such a lovely poem.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
Comment from tfawcus
Your writing fulfils the requirements of the contest challenge and you reinforce the fact that God is everywhere at all times with your use of the three words, omnipotent, omniscient and omnipresent.
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Your writing fulfils the requirements of the contest challenge and you reinforce the fact that God is everywhere at all times with your use of the three words, omnipotent, omniscient and omnipresent.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
Comment from LisaMay
Sometimes spiritual contests get labeled as fiction, so I am pleased to see this one is non-fiction. Clearly faith and belief are solid facts in many people's lives. You've detailed the main points about God's abilities as the Creator and omni-everything here.
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Sometimes spiritual contests get labeled as fiction, so I am pleased to see this one is non-fiction. Clearly faith and belief are solid facts in many people's lives. You've detailed the main points about God's abilities as the Creator and omni-everything here.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
Comment from James Ott
Thoughtfully done, with common agreement on the description. The contest puts a strain on any writer. My only exception is the line that reads: God gifts change momentarily. Should that be God's gifts? That may be a quibble on an otherwise fine piece.
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Thoughtfully done, with common agreement on the description. The contest puts a strain on any writer. My only exception is the line that reads: God gifts change momentarily. Should that be God's gifts? That may be a quibble on an otherwise fine piece.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well you did it. Thirty-three words following the myriad of restrictions.
I am compelled, however, to ask - How do you feel about the 'spirit of the law'? Using a semicolon, which separates two complete sentences, usually with a contraction but not required, the two sentences bonded in some manner. I completely understand the ploy to win the contest, but as a reviewer of another work, what would be your reaction to semicolons used in place of simple periods?
Good luck.
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Well you did it. Thirty-three words following the myriad of restrictions.
I am compelled, however, to ask - How do you feel about the 'spirit of the law'? Using a semicolon, which separates two complete sentences, usually with a contraction but not required, the two sentences bonded in some manner. I completely understand the ploy to win the contest, but as a reviewer of another work, what would be your reaction to semicolons used in place of simple periods?
Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
Comment from Pangalactic
Wowsers this is like a power statement/advertisement advocating for the the great Creator!
The all powerful architect of it all.
Great job!............
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Wowsers this is like a power statement/advertisement advocating for the the great Creator!
The all powerful architect of it all.
Great job!............
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
As the instructions say, "This is a very tough and challenging writing prompt to follow and maintain." I've examined your entry closely and find that you are definitely in compliance. I especially appreciate your comprehensive description of the God I know. Best wishes in the contest.
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As the instructions say, "This is a very tough and challenging writing prompt to follow and maintain." I've examined your entry closely and find that you are definitely in compliance. I especially appreciate your comprehensive description of the God I know. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
Comment from Spitfire
This is a challenging prompt and you have followed all the rules. Excellent use of parallel structure as well as content in the phrases defining God as omnipotent, omnipresent, and omniscient. This sets your entry above the rest.
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This is a challenging prompt and you have followed all the rules. Excellent use of parallel structure as well as content in the phrases defining God as omnipotent, omnipresent, and omniscient. This sets your entry above the rest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
