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One Sentence 33 Word Non-Fiction Contest; What does God

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Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
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Wow great job I wish you well in the competition keep up the good work this was very well done Written to the T to the writer put a writer keep up the good work you're very talented

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2022

Comment from in777wr#
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This is a well written one sentence writing prompt. This seems to be difficult to do, but you pulled it off. Yes, God is all of those things, and more. You followed the writing prompt well. Good, solid message.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2022

Comment from Mickamus J
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The challenge is not a simple one but you seem to have it correctly put out for the reader about what you would want to put out across. God is indeed responsible for many a thing.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2022

Comment from amahra
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This Thirty-three-Word Spiritual Nonfiction is very well written and thought-out. I love this contest. It seems relatively new and I've been a member since 2010. Great job!

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2022

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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In this response to a very challenging prompt, with so many rules for such a short write, you have reverently captured the nature, person, and majesty of God Almighty.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

Comment from Mia Twysted
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This piece sends the message that there is something else out there. Something that watches over you and gives you what they think you need. There is a presents that can be felt.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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A very creative use of colored text. It's effective. You did a nice job with the prompt. The vocabulary you used added dimension to your piece. Well done

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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The Bible describes for us who God is. God is the All-Powerful Creator of the universe. The Lord is One in three divine persons, Father, Son, and Holy Spirit. He is holy, loving, and perfect. God is totally trustworthy and safe. He alone is our salvation

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

Comment from lyenochka
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All you say is correct. God gives all what we need. God is omnipotent, omnipresent and omniscient. It seems you met the requirements of the contest well. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

Comment from Teri7
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This is very nice and well written what you have penned for the 33 Word Spiritual non fiction work you have done for the contest. You used very good descriptive and true words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022