Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from royowen
As much as Cordero denies his offsides are teasing him about the "date". It seems that everyone knows he's attracted to Alexandra except him, but we know thats no the case, this one a great romance, you're romance stories are unique, I'm very comfortable reading them Barbara, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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As much as Cordero denies his offsides are teasing him about the "date". It seems that everyone knows he's attracted to Alexandra except him, but we know thats no the case, this one a great romance, you're romance stories are unique, I'm very comfortable reading them Barbara, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. I'm pitching one of my novel to Hallmark and need all the encouragement and prayers I can get.
Comment from nomi338
Cord may deny it, but it is pretty clear that he and Ali are headed down the romance lane. Others my try to cut in, but they will not be allowed to distract the two soon to be love birds from closing the deal on the inevitable.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Cord may deny it, but it is pretty clear that he and Ali are headed down the romance lane. Others my try to cut in, but they will not be allowed to distract the two soon to be love birds from closing the deal on the inevitable.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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These two will have many trials. The big one, Cord hates cities and Ali is a big city lawyer who loves her family. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I love the way this story is developing. These two are definitely into each other. There may be trouble with Pat who seems to be determined to win her away from Cord. I enjoy your romances. You are and excellent writer.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I love the way this story is developing. These two are definitely into each other. There may be trouble with Pat who seems to be determined to win her away from Cord. I enjoy your romances. You are and excellent writer.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. I need it as I'm pitching one of my novels to Hallmark.
Comment from BethShelby
I love the way this story is developing. These two are definitely into each other. There may be trouble with Pat who seems to be determined to win her away from Cord. I enjoy your romances. You are and excellent writer.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I love the way this story is developing. These two are definitely into each other. There may be trouble with Pat who seems to be determined to win her away from Cord. I enjoy your romances. You are and excellent writer.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. I need it as I'm pitching one of my novels to Hallmark.
Comment from Janilou
It's well written and the dialogue between the characters feels natural and easy to follow. As this is chapter 7 or 8 I'm not quite up to speed with what's going on, but I found it easy to connect with the characters. I liked the interaction between Bob, Jim and Cordero in the barn.
No errors noted. No edits needed that I could find.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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It's well written and the dialogue between the characters feels natural and easy to follow. As this is chapter 7 or 8 I'm not quite up to speed with what's going on, but I found it easy to connect with the characters. I liked the interaction between Bob, Jim and Cordero in the barn.
No errors noted. No edits needed that I could find.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you. I hope you drop by again.
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Your story has some interesting contrasts. I will look forward to reading additional chapters. Thank you for the western flavor. You seem very well versed in it.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Your story has some interesting contrasts. I will look forward to reading additional chapters. Thank you for the western flavor. You seem very well versed in it.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you for dropping by. I hope you do again.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another fine chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to see how the "date" goes. I'm concerned about Pat intruding. Well done.
You might have already been told about the line spacing. I find sometimes when I paste a word document in, the spacing looks too big between paragraphs, but if you fix it before it's in the main editing box, you will see when you get there that there are no line spaces.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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This is another fine chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to see how the "date" goes. I'm concerned about Pat intruding. Well done.
You might have already been told about the line spacing. I find sometimes when I paste a word document in, the spacing looks too big between paragraphs, but if you fix it before it's in the main editing box, you will see when you get there that there are no line spaces.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I did the line spacing. It shows up on mine. I am wondering why it's not showing up on yours. HMMM I need to investigate. Thank you.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Perhaps you were fixing it while I was reading it.
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I hope so. I just rechecked.
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Yes, I just looked at it again and it's all good.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hmm, now I wonder what is going on with Pat, I don't trust him. I like Cordero, he's going to end up with Ali, and she has enough to cope with at the moment, as I'm sure her ex will be making an appearance soon. Hmmm, does Pat know anything about that??
I see you are using the advanced not the basic. You need to manualy go and put all your spaces in. I found that Google docs did what yours has done, but my MSWord copies over perfectly. You'll get used to it soon.
Well done on this chapter, Barbara, it's getting exciting! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Hmm, now I wonder what is going on with Pat, I don't trust him. I like Cordero, he's going to end up with Ali, and she has enough to cope with at the moment, as I'm sure her ex will be making an appearance soon. Hmmm, does Pat know anything about that??
I see you are using the advanced not the basic. You need to manualy go and put all your spaces in. I found that Google docs did what yours has done, but my MSWord copies over perfectly. You'll get used to it soon.
Well done on this chapter, Barbara, it's getting exciting! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I did. I will recheck that. I am wondering if you reviewed while I did it. Thank you. Did you earn the money attached?
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I see you have now, it's a pain, but I can't see any other way around it unless you have MS Word. Yes, I did get the payment, thank you! xx
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Thank you. I do have word, but it still strange.
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Oh, that's weird. I've just copied mine over from Word and it's fine. Try playing around with the settings on Word. There are lots of different ones.
Comment from Shirley McLain
A great chapter, and I always enjoy the read. I didn't find any errors. If I had a six, it would be yours, but as usual I don't. Have a great weekend. Until next time. Shirley
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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A great chapter, and I always enjoy the read. I didn't find any errors. If I had a six, it would be yours, but as usual I don't. Have a great weekend. Until next time. Shirley
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you. A virtual six is good. I accept them and hugs.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another very interesting chapter in your story. I am not an expert in English grammar but there is one place I noticed that didn't sound right.
"The two we've lost is too many". Should it be "are too many"? Maybe either one is okay.
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Another very interesting chapter in your story. I am not an expert in English grammar but there is one place I noticed that didn't sound right.
"The two we've lost is too many". Should it be "are too many"? Maybe either one is okay.
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I am betting you're right. Did you read this before I had the money attached. I sure hope not. Thank you.
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No, but I did read it before you changed the font, it is much easier to read now.
