Blended Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "The Gates of Hell"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
6 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
You did it, I think. Good work.
But when they gave you half the words to use, it seems like all a contestant need do is put them on index cards, shuffle, and type as they fall.
Hitler destroyed might be better.
Best wishes and good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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You did it, I think. Good work.
But when they gave you half the words to use, it seems like all a contestant need do is put them on index cards, shuffle, and type as they fall.
Hitler destroyed might be better.
Best wishes and good luck.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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I tend to agree. I love destroyed, but needed to work in crushed. Thanks much!
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I tend to agree. I love destroyed, but needed to work in crushed. Thanks much!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I think you need 101 words and this only clocks in at 100 (hyphenated words count as one). Saying that, powermonger is also a single word which would reduce it further to 99. Flirting with disqualification here.
none other than the Nazi, Hitler crushed,- should probably have another comma after Hitler.
Not sure Putin's in the same league as our little austrian friend yet though...
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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Hi there,
I think you need 101 words and this only clocks in at 100 (hyphenated words count as one). Saying that, powermonger is also a single word which would reduce it further to 99. Flirting with disqualification here.
none other than the Nazi, Hitler crushed,- should probably have another comma after Hitler.
Not sure Putin's in the same league as our little austrian friend yet though...
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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I am are good at 101 just checked thanks
Comment from jessizero
You did a good job with this prompt. Congratulations on telling a story with so few words. Thank you for sharing it with us in the community. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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You did a good job with this prompt. Congratulations on telling a story with so few words. Thank you for sharing it with us in the community. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks, friend!
Comment from Sally Law
This is pretty darn close to the end, visionary poet. The fiery pit awaits Putin for sure and all those fueling his evil power. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sally :)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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This is pretty darn close to the end, visionary poet. The fiery pit awaits Putin for sure and all those fueling his evil power. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sally :)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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thanks Sal as we al pray for the end of this madness,
Comment from in777wr#
This is a good Satire fiction. Vivid descriptions throughout this story. The picture goes well with this piece. I looked at the required words that was needed. I did not see crush, or slave. Maybe that was an oversight.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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This is a good Satire fiction. Vivid descriptions throughout this story. The picture goes well with this piece. I looked at the required words that was needed. I did not see crush, or slave. Maybe that was an oversight.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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The last lines
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a hell of a situation. Too many people from every nation turned their heads and closed their eyes and ears. Now look at what has happened. God is not happy. He warned not to mess with the water and oil. This world will not survive a Nuclear War. Thank you.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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This is a hell of a situation. Too many people from every nation turned their heads and closed their eyes and ears. Now look at what has happened. God is not happy. He warned not to mess with the water and oil. This world will not survive a Nuclear War. Thank you.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Carolyn, right on! WE must pray for the end of the madness before the nukes start flying, China is waiting in the wings rubbing there fortune cookies.