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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from country ranch writer
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It was Gods will for Jason to pass his body on to others so that they may live. It is the miracle that after death there is still life so others may pass life on.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
    It's always my pleasure to see your comments and review on my work!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment from Rbrendaartwork18
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I came across this by accident as I was checking a story with my art being used. I am From FAR. I was very moved by your story.. It was written from the heart I could tell. It flowed too and I wanted to read more and again as your feelings in this came to me as mine were when we lost a son at 28. He died unexpectedly in his sleep. The coroner's report identified an aneurysm burst in the head. This was in May 1997 .. the Christmas time 1996 Peter had a head on crash and the airbag we thought saved him, he had no damage except a bump on the head. He recovered almost at once but the bump created a blood clot .. The rest ..... .. your organ contribute is an amazing idea. I applaud your writing very much.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
    This is a this is a hard one to respond to.
    I've only talked to about maybe a dozen people that have lost a son.
    (In the past 19 years)
    My journey started two and a half years when I came out of a deep depression cursing myself and Jesus Christ for each day that I existed.
    I turned the TV on it was set to the news station at 4:00 in the morning.
    There was three boys missing in Camden New Jersey.
    Apparently it was a block party and these were all Hispanic children.
    The older child was autistic.
    That was when I had an epiphany of where these children were so I called into the Camden Police department and gave my thoughts.
    The only thing I can say was that they were trapped in a dark place and they were extremely scared.
    The officer said they were getting calls from psychics all over the world.
    They said that they were checking the Cooper River and I said that that's not where they are.
    It's common sense if one child fell in the other two would go home to get help not try to save him so there's no way all three had drowned.
    They were checking the rail yard to see if they were in a rail train compartment.
    Unfortunately they were trapped in the trunk of an old Cadillac and the actual backyard of one of the three children's grandparents.
    The police searched that area at night when the children were sleeping and didn't try to Pop the trunk.
    Since it was a summer the next day by 1:00 in the afternoon to heat was so intense in there that of course all three of them died a horrible death.
    I set up a charity donation for David Augusto the one child.
    I actually drove to Camden with flowers for The Three families which were all forget Me Not that were potted and would come back every year because in the newspaper there was pictures of flowers on the front lawn of one of the houses.
    When I drove to Camden to try and get somebody to escort me to David Augusta's house so I can talk the police officer said that they had 20 people out on sick time because of the incident.
    ...
    When I finally did get directions from a nice young woman that was walking on the street I meant David augusto's father and his name is David also.
    The one family was on vacation in Florida which didn't make sense and the other family moved away.
    I gave all the potted plants to David.
    I also met the mother and there was a little girl too who didn't know what was going on with her little brother at that point in time.
    So he became my very first member.
    "The Shittiest Club on Earth"
    The way to become a member you have to lose your son.
    And yes I donated my son and three out of four people are still alive today.
    And in a way I'm happy about that.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
reply by Rbrendaartwork18 on 23-Mar-2022
    Yours is an amazing story. You have developed. You have compassion in your endeavours. Thank you so much for sharing this ... your in most being. God Bless.
Comment from Mickamus J
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It is a very intense, clear, simple but complicated situation that is not something that anyone can or should move on from. Such a memory deserves immortality. My opinion. Grief and pain are constant companions to those who have lost loved ones, sometimes no explanation is enough. Memories are just that, it is not real but the scars are.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
    This is a terrible month for me and I'm continuing to do now for the 19th year by journaling my pain and relieving it the best I can.
    Thanks very much for your compassionate review Mickamus J
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from kahpot
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Wow! many stories in this wonderful read, another mans heart can save a life, the three million they spent on chasing th golden fleece could have been put to much better use, this was an absorbing read, thank you for sharing****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
    Always a pleasure to see you reviewing my work dear friend!
    Doctor Ricky 1024