Comment from Thatguypk

Excellent

A great piece of writing about the toxicity of a broken trust. I can really feel the pain and disappointment emanating from your verse. Good luck in the contest.
PK

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022

Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Glad you're gone! writing prompt contest. Good form.

The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I would have to say that after all they seemed to have put you through it would be a blessing they are no longer around, an excellent read, poem, and entry for this prompt, best wishes****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Wow! This is so dark and I am loving it! Sometimes people break and unfortunately don't put themselves back together. This is a nitty gritty sad truth if life. Well done!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022

Thank you this tremendous review, it's awesome. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Good

How sad. I hope not a real life experience. Be well; or be better. .........................................................................................................................................................

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022

Thanks.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I like your imagery in this poem. It seemed sad and angry all at once. You did a good job with the prompt. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022

Thank you for your encouraging words, they mean a lot. :)