Mum
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Comment from Thatguypk
A beautiful tribute to a Mum, your Mum, and any mum for that matter. Very nicely put together in a verse with good rhyme and rhythm. Thank you for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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A beautiful tribute to a Mum, your Mum, and any mum for that matter. Very nicely put together in a verse with good rhyme and rhythm. Thank you for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have written a great tribute to a Mum. The pictures are beautiful.
It brings back many memories for myself. The poem fits the picture perfect. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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You have written a great tribute to a Mum. The pictures are beautiful.
It brings back many memories for myself. The poem fits the picture perfect. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thankyou very much, yes I love and appreciate my Mum, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bridge
A very beautiful and touching poem . I have a 13 yr old son and I love my mum too. It reminded me of her . I really connected to your poem
With regards
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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A very beautiful and touching poem . I have a 13 yr old son and I love my mum too. It reminded me of her . I really connected to your poem
With regards
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much
Comment from LisaMay
Aw shucks, I love this poem... in a different way to how you love your Mum of course. The emphasis on 'my Mum' throughout all the stages of the relationship works well - from baby to forever being your Mum's 'baby' when older.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Aw shucks, I love this poem... in a different way to how you love your Mum of course. The emphasis on 'my Mum' throughout all the stages of the relationship works well - from baby to forever being your Mum's 'baby' when older.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Aw Thank you so very much, I started with Mum and could not let her go-(in rhyme or heart)
Comment from Wendy G
This is a beautiful poem, and you obviously have a great deal of love for your beautiful mother, who has meant the world to you at every stage of your life. Lovely photos too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is a beautiful poem, and you obviously have a great deal of love for your beautiful mother, who has meant the world to you at every stage of your life. Lovely photos too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much, yes I do love and have a lot of respect for my Mum
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a great entry for the contest, and a lovely tribute to your Mum. So glad you appreciate her and are thankful for all that she has done for you over the years. Great pictures to illustrate.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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This is a great entry for the contest, and a lovely tribute to your Mum. So glad you appreciate her and are thankful for all that she has done for you over the years. Great pictures to illustrate.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome
Comment from lancellot
Well, now this is certainly a strong contender for first place. I like the shifting downward repeating line. The story of and truth in every line is both touching and relatable to all the mothers that make up the majority of FanStory. Even the dad have moms to everyone will love this.
A sure winner.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Well, now this is certainly a strong contender for first place. I like the shifting downward repeating line. The story of and truth in every line is both touching and relatable to all the mothers that make up the majority of FanStory. Even the dad have moms to everyone will love this.
A sure winner.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Yes Mums are important to everyone's life
Comment from John Ciarmello
Great piece! I enjoyed the read here. It's refreshing to the eyes to see something different in poetry. I think this is a wonderful contest entry. I wish you much success.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Great piece! I enjoyed the read here. It's refreshing to the eyes to see something different in poetry. I think this is a wonderful contest entry. I wish you much success.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from tfawcus
Mothering is a role that is never finished except by death. Your poem gives a snapshot of what your mum means to you. I'm sure she would be touched by it.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Mothering is a role that is never finished except by death. Your poem gives a snapshot of what your mum means to you. I'm sure she would be touched by it.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you, and how very true
Comment from jessizero
This was so sweet and lovely. It makes me think of my own mother. You did a great job expressing love in this poem. Keep up the good work. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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This was so sweet and lovely. It makes me think of my own mother. You did a great job expressing love in this poem. Keep up the good work. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
