Comment from Crystal Miller

Excellent

Cute and catchy!

Flows from beginning to end as one thought.

I have written like this before too and wondered if I should share. Way to pave the way!
Thanks!!

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

thank you crystal! :-)

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Congratulations. It must be nice to win a writing contest. I have given up on trying, as I never seem to write the kinds of poems that do well in writing contests. I feel that I have won whenever I receive an all time best award.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

don't give up! i didn't win my first contest on here until 2008 - i became a member in 2004! took me 4 years!

thank you nomi :)

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

This reflect the heartfelt feelings of many writers hoping to receive recognition for their creative work. I understand why it is the contest winner. For one thing, it gives an opportunity for writers to recognize another talented writer. Congratulations, Shelley Kaye! Smiles and hugs, Janet

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

thank you janet :-)

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

I get it. It is a good poem. I mean it has got a blue ribbon right next to it that says "contest winner." So, who am I disagree with that. Besides, it is very clever, maybe even creative. Congratulations!

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

lol thank you terry :-)

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem well deserves the contest win. Congratulations, Michelle.
This is what we all feel when we try to write poems or prose.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

thank you joan :-)

reply by dragonpoet on 06-Mar-2022

No problem, Michelle.
Joan

Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw

Excellent

Congratulations on winning the contest entry. With these amazing words and meanings, you deserve the prize. I really wish these words written will never age..., Kit

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

thank you lots!! :-)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This two-stanza poem, Ageless Words, meets the basic requirements and presents the in-the-moment capture of a challenge to produce a poem which becomes somehow timeless. Good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

thank you bill :-)

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I am with you all the way there. I feel such elation when I win a competition. I think your words are truly ageless. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Jen.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

cool! thank you jen :-)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I hope your muse returns so that your words can reach someone's heart or ruffle someone's feathers, good luck with the contest, a blank page comes to mind here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

thank you dolly :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

There is nothing wrong with your piece, tho' who today holds a pen? I exchange pen with keyboard as I read but then how does a keyboard scratch? So scratch that thought. Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022

i always write first
then put it on my computer
lol thank you tom :)