My Baby
A woman reports a crime4 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Yeah, let's get our priorities straight! lol! I enjoyed it. Loved the pace. No time to get bored and weighed down with your quick prose. Lots of wit and humor. Having worked in law enforcement at one time, if I remember correctly, you must have heard enough stories to keep you going for a lifetime. Hope you and the family are all well, Bob. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Yeah, let's get our priorities straight! lol! I enjoyed it. Loved the pace. No time to get bored and weighed down with your quick prose. Lots of wit and humor. Having worked in law enforcement at one time, if I remember correctly, you must have heard enough stories to keep you going for a lifetime. Hope you and the family are all well, Bob. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thanks. Glad you liked it
Comment from Barry Penfold
Great little story. Love how it flows and the imagery of the police officer becoming increasingly frustrated with the situation he had really created for himself is spot on. More please.
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Great little story. Love how it flows and the imagery of the police officer becoming increasingly frustrated with the situation he had really created for himself is spot on. More please.
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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You're very kind, thank you
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a great story line and kept me transfixed from beginning to end. You unraveled the real story in a manner that kept just making the situation worse. I had a great deal of empathy the poor desk officer, although police don't deal with a lot of cases involving intellectual property. The pen name was a nice inclusion, as was the book title. Great entry.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This is a great story line and kept me transfixed from beginning to end. You unraveled the real story in a manner that kept just making the situation worse. I had a great deal of empathy the poor desk officer, although police don't deal with a lot of cases involving intellectual property. The pen name was a nice inclusion, as was the book title. Great entry.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thanks. Glad you liked it
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You are welcome.
Comment from Thatguypk
This is so ridiculously funny that I absolutely love it. Wishing you best of luck in the contest, but you should be looking even further with this. It would make a brilliant comedy sketch for television. So enjoyable.
PK
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This is so ridiculously funny that I absolutely love it. Wishing you best of luck in the contest, but you should be looking even further with this. It would make a brilliant comedy sketch for television. So enjoyable.
PK
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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You're very kind, thank you for your review and generous score
