If Bubbles Could Be Butterflies
Picture This Club26 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Awww! This is a delightful poem, my friend. Blowing bubbles is something that every child adores, yet if those bubbles turned into butterflies, this ol' gal would be puffing too. :)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Awww! This is a delightful poem, my friend. Blowing bubbles is something that every child adores, yet if those bubbles turned into butterflies, this ol' gal would be puffing too. :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Dawn. I still like blowing bubbles.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A delightful fantasy poem for the Picture this club, Yvonne. Who doesn't love blowing bubbles and watching them float away, and then tou add in the lovely butterflies and whamo, a great little story. Loved it, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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A delightful fantasy poem for the Picture this club, Yvonne. Who doesn't love blowing bubbles and watching them float away, and then tou add in the lovely butterflies and whamo, a great little story. Loved it, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you. I still love blowing bubbles.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I very much like this image of butterflies as bubbles (or the inverse - it all seems deliciously muddled) and especially the words :
'tiny rainbow orbs' resonate inside my mind.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I very much like this image of butterflies as bubbles (or the inverse - it all seems deliciously muddled) and especially the words :
'tiny rainbow orbs' resonate inside my mind.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad you like that part.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a great take on the picture, dear SATP, and the lovely poem you've created from it, is just lovely. I love butterflies, and will miss my Buddleia butterfly bush I had in our garden in the last house we lived in. I like the way you have chosen bubbles for your poem, totally different from everyone elses. But then again, you have always been original in your writing. Well done, my dear sister, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is a great take on the picture, dear SATP, and the lovely poem you've created from it, is just lovely. I love butterflies, and will miss my Buddleia butterfly bush I had in our garden in the last house we lived in. I like the way you have chosen bubbles for your poem, totally different from everyone elses. But then again, you have always been original in your writing. Well done, my dear sister, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm always a bit off from everyone else. I live in my own little world, but it's okay. They all know me there. lol.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I enjoy wordplay. This is fun: " flutter by." This has a playful animation. It could serve as several metaphors. There is powerful alliteration. The hard sounding consonants, especially the b's creates an interesting effect. To say some word beginning with b, we have to make a bit of a bubble with our cheeks. Cool. Huh?
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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I enjoy wordplay. This is fun: " flutter by." This has a playful animation. It could serve as several metaphors. There is powerful alliteration. The hard sounding consonants, especially the b's creates an interesting effect. To say some word beginning with b, we have to make a bit of a bubble with our cheeks. Cool. Huh?
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Yes, cool! Thanks for a delightful review.
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***smile***
Comment from judiverse
What a charming picture to work with, the child blowing butterflies. It certainly was a great inspiration for you. This is a delightful poem that children would love. They would like the image of blowing butterflies. Excellent rhyme, with the fourth line for variation.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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What a charming picture to work with, the child blowing butterflies. It certainly was a great inspiration for you. This is a delightful poem that children would love. They would like the image of blowing butterflies. Excellent rhyme, with the fourth line for variation.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you. The photo was provided by Jan for the club.
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You're welcome. I really enjoyed this whimsical poem. judi
Comment from Wendy G
A whimsical poem letting the imagination fly free, like the butterflies. You have written it in an interesting way with the first three lines rhyming in each stanza. Gentle, lovely poem.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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A whimsical poem letting the imagination fly free, like the butterflies. You have written it in an interesting way with the first three lines rhyming in each stanza. Gentle, lovely poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute fantasy poem. It would be a poem children would enjoy. I wonder where butterflies go when it rains. It would seem the wind and rain would beat those beautiful wings to pieces. It's not like they fold up.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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This is a cute fantasy poem. It would be a poem children would enjoy. I wonder where butterflies go when it rains. It would seem the wind and rain would beat those beautiful wings to pieces. It's not like they fold up.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Good question. I don't know. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This whimsical write is well rhymed with a great flow and I was floating on one of those bubbles and thinking of rainbows, much enjoyed, a fun break from reality, Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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This whimsical write is well rhymed with a great flow and I was floating on one of those bubbles and thinking of rainbows, much enjoyed, a fun break from reality, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad you floated along with us.
Comment from jessizero
I like the idea of bubbles and butterflies. You make their adventures come to life in this poem. You've done a great job. Thanks for sharing this with the rest of us.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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I like the idea of bubbles and butterflies. You make their adventures come to life in this poem. You've done a great job. Thanks for sharing this with the rest of us.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reviewing.
