Angels Having Fun
A dad consoles his son.3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I like it and only felt one word was excessive and it was such a small thing, and yours at that, so perhaps I shant say whay it was. Nah. Why be a tease, my friend? I would not have the article "the" before Southeast.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I like it and only felt one word was excessive and it was such a small thing, and yours at that, so perhaps I shant say whay it was. Nah. Why be a tease, my friend? I would not have the article "the" before Southeast.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the read and the for the tip. I will review.
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that's fine
Comment from Mickamus J
Thank you for your sharing. It is clear that fathers clearly keep us afloat and protected in the eyes of fear and scary situations. It is a clear memory that comes to mind when reading your poem.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your sharing. It is clear that fathers clearly keep us afloat and protected in the eyes of fear and scary situations. It is a clear memory that comes to mind when reading your poem.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Could not agree more about the role of dads.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully and creatively written, vividly descriptive, and delightful in its message. We comfort those frightened children with such explanations.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully and creatively written, vividly descriptive, and delightful in its message. We comfort those frightened children with such explanations.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and to comment. Much appreciated.
