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I Love You, Honey

A late Valentine poem

7 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Very sweet. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
    Thank you, Tom. :) I wrote it and revised it a few times. My wife is always a work in progress.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your highly romantic and vividly descriptive love poem convey a strong message about being totally in love and the sense of loneliness and longing when not in her presence.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
    Thank you, Janice. :) Yet, all poems written at the moment need revisions and I see and try to correct them. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello mystery Poet a merry Monday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your rhyming writing prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
    Thanks, 13. I corrected and edited one stanza. It flows and is better.
Comment from jaded831
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Beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady. I feel your pain in your words. She truly was the love of your life. She will always have a place in your heart, but it does get easier. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
    Thank you, jaded831. I edited one stanza so it would be correct. My heart is still with me. :)
Comment from Wendy G
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A lovely poem of love and romance, and separation from the loved one. Fourth line from the bottom - should it be "A flower"? Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
    Thank you, Wendy. I edited that stanza so it would be correct. My heart is still with me. :)
Comment from Mickamus J
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Thank you for sharing your poem. I hope you are alright. I am feeling the pain and suffering yet I feel the happiness and joy of love. I felt that loss in the end.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
    Thank you, Mickamus. I edited one stanza so it would be correct. My heart is still with me. :)
Comment from lancellot
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This is very nice and I think it should do well in the contest. The rhymes are strong and flow nicely. Love not around and missing is a theme many can relate with.

I flower then appears to me,
with that lovely smile I fancy.

I would take another at this small stanza, and see if it says what you intend clearly.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
    Thank you, lancellot. I edited that stanza so it would be correct. My heart is still with me. :)