And She Smiled
Zoe doing what she loved.60 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
'And you smiled is a significant statement, and as it repeats, it tells of its importance.
And what better way to express, than with a smile.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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'And you smiled is a significant statement, and as it repeats, it tells of its importance.
And what better way to express, than with a smile.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you, my friend, for your very kind review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this entry for the Memories contest. Nice picture of your wife, she looks happy and I am sure that was because she was doing something she loved. Hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Well done on this entry for the Memories contest. Nice picture of your wife, she looks happy and I am sure that was because she was doing something she loved. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your very kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I found the poem to be lovely and moving already--then I read the notes. What a wonderful thing, to be remembered as one who was always smiling. You obviously have beautiful memories of your wife.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I found the poem to be lovely and moving already--then I read the notes. What a wonderful thing, to be remembered as one who was always smiling. You obviously have beautiful memories of your wife.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, you are very kind.
Comment from jessizero
This sounds like a wonderful memory. A smile is a wonderful thing to remember.
Keep up the good work! I wish you the best in the competition. I am sure you will do well.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This sounds like a wonderful memory. A smile is a wonderful thing to remember.
Keep up the good work! I wish you the best in the competition. I am sure you will do well.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, you are very kind.
Comment from Begin Again
How lovely...Being able to remember someone we love because of their smile is precious beyond words. She does have a beautiful smile...it looks like it goes all the way to her toes.
Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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How lovely...Being able to remember someone we love because of their smile is precious beyond words. She does have a beautiful smile...it looks like it goes all the way to her toes.
Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, very kind of you.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem uses repetition well to show the effect of a smile on other people around you and the memories they cause. It shows the effect of helping others too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This poem uses repetition well to show the effect of a smile on other people around you and the memories they cause. It shows the effect of helping others too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, a very kind review!
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You are most kindly welcome.
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This memories contest entry speaks your own experience of memories how, why and what for she smiled, even after working all day long at some one's garden or at other place; you smile at the end of the day; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This memories contest entry speaks your own experience of memories how, why and what for she smiled, even after working all day long at some one's garden or at other place; you smile at the end of the day; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, you are very kind!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. Your writing is delicate with a heartfelt sentiment. I admire gardeners as I do not have a green thumb.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. Your writing is delicate with a heartfelt sentiment. I admire gardeners as I do not have a green thumb.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, you are very kind.
Comment from HarryT
I like the short lines of this work. My one thought is the last line. To me it doesn't feel right. I know you may wish to be consistent with the repeating line, however, I do not believe it is necessary. My suggestion for the last line is - Your wonderful smile. Or whatever adjective you may choose to modify smile.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I like the short lines of this work. My one thought is the last line. To me it doesn't feel right. I know you may wish to be consistent with the repeating line, however, I do not believe it is necessary. My suggestion for the last line is - Your wonderful smile. Or whatever adjective you may choose to modify smile.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for much, you are very kind. As far as the last line is concerned, I do appreciate your input. I am going to leave it the way it is. I know she would smile at that thought.
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Such is the power of an author. You can write what is in your heart.
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Harry, thank you, you are one of the good guys! The unknown author.
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At least my wife thinks so, most of the time.
Comment from Annmuma
Excuse me one minute while I get my tissue! What a wonderful tribute not only to someone you loved very much, but also to the relationship you built and the two people who emerged as one; not only did she smile, but you appreciated those smiles. The epitome of what marriages and memories should be. I love it and you have my vote! ann
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Excuse me one minute while I get my tissue! What a wonderful tribute not only to someone you loved very much, but also to the relationship you built and the two people who emerged as one; not only did she smile, but you appreciated those smiles. The epitome of what marriages and memories should be. I love it and you have my vote! ann
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
