And She Smiled
Zoe doing what she loved.60 total reviews
Comment from Bridge
A lovely poem . The photograph is very attractive. I loved the line
'And you smiled'
Very well written . I enjoyed your poem..............
With regards
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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A lovely poem . The photograph is very attractive. I loved the line
'And you smiled'
Very well written . I enjoyed your poem..............
With regards
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review!
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
You are definitely in love with those memories of your beautiful wife. And I am sorry to hear about your loss. Nice write. Keep Writing. And try to stop by to talk. Either way, stay connected
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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You are definitely in love with those memories of your beautiful wife. And I am sorry to hear about your loss. Nice write. Keep Writing. And try to stop by to talk. Either way, stay connected
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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You are very kind, thank you very much!
Comment from tfawcus
There is so much power for good in a smile. People like your wife who spread the joy of their smiles through the world are a great force for good and a wonderful example to us all. Nicely penned with the repetitions for emphasis.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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There is so much power for good in a smile. People like your wife who spread the joy of their smiles through the world are a great force for good and a wonderful example to us all. Nicely penned with the repetitions for emphasis.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Chaity begins at or at least near home. When feeling poorly; help another. ...............................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Chaity begins at or at least near home. When feeling poorly; help another. ...............................................................................................................................
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you very for your review.
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Comment from Jennifer Keeley
Your piece was very well written. You tied together activities with emotions and memories. It was very heartfelt. There is usually something important that stands out about a person and with this piece it was a smile. Even with some difficult memories, there tends to be something that keeps us going. I enjoyed how you pieced this together. Nice job and you keep smiling too.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Your piece was very well written. You tied together activities with emotions and memories. It was very heartfelt. There is usually something important that stands out about a person and with this piece it was a smile. Even with some difficult memories, there tends to be something that keeps us going. I enjoyed how you pieced this together. Nice job and you keep smiling too.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your very kind review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Memories writing prompt contest.
Heartfelt story in a poem about memories of your wife. I'm sorry for your loss. This poem creates a vivid, sensory rich experience for the reader.
Well crafted and engaging. Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the Memories writing prompt contest.
Heartfelt story in a poem about memories of your wife. I'm sorry for your loss. This poem creates a vivid, sensory rich experience for the reader.
Well crafted and engaging. Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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I appreciate your review. Coming from such an excellent poet and who I consider to be the master of Haiku, I am humbled.
Comment from victor 66
What a lovely way, the way you presented in your poem, to say goodbye to a very special loved one. This lady's smile obviously meant a great deal to you and I can only partially relate to what your emotions must be. I wish you well.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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What a lovely way, the way you presented in your poem, to say goodbye to a very special loved one. This lady's smile obviously meant a great deal to you and I can only partially relate to what your emotions must be. I wish you well.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your very kind review.
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You are most welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry of a tribute to your wonderful wife. I can tell from your entry that she was a great person. I wish I could have known her.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry of a tribute to your wonderful wife. I can tell from your entry that she was a great person. I wish I could have known her.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Barbara, thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Teri7
What a blessed, precious and happy poem you have penned about your wife and her smile! This made my heart happy to read this. You used great descriptive words and a very lovely picture of her. She looked so sweet. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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What a blessed, precious and happy poem you have penned about your wife and her smile! This made my heart happy to read this. You used great descriptive words and a very lovely picture of her. She looked so sweet. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Wow, Thank you for the six stars and the very kind review!!!
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you are so welcome. This poem really touched my heart! Blessings, Teri
Comment from jenintorre
This is such a sad poem. I really feel for you. I like the repititon of 'and you smiled'. It works very well.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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This is such a sad poem. I really feel for you. I like the repititon of 'and you smiled'. It works very well.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I did not intend for it to be sad, there is happiness in remembering the smiles.
