Witness
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "When the Feeling Fades"Modern struggle in another world.
4 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
WOW. That was an amazing story. I am so glad you chose to share this story with the rest of the community. Please keep up the good work! Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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WOW. That was an amazing story. I am so glad you chose to share this story with the rest of the community. Please keep up the good work! Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from Candice Cermak
This is the best thing I've read all day, honestly. "Children fighting children." That will stick with me. This has the makings of a great novel. I really felt like I was there because of how descriptive you wrote.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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This is the best thing I've read all day, honestly. "Children fighting children." That will stick with me. This has the makings of a great novel. I really felt like I was there because of how descriptive you wrote.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate you giving it the time. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from John Ciarmello
A spectacular chapter! I was drawn to your style of writing. The drama behind your words and exactness of each scene. I took away a good feel for the characters from this chapter and will follow and try to catch up. Your vividness brought me to your characters as I felt the young boy's pain and shed tears with Karsa. Great writing I'm a fan.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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A spectacular chapter! I was drawn to your style of writing. The drama behind your words and exactness of each scene. I took away a good feel for the characters from this chapter and will follow and try to catch up. Your vividness brought me to your characters as I felt the young boy's pain and shed tears with Karsa. Great writing I'm a fan.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate you giving it the time. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great reading chapter. It's full of tension, action and keeps me reading. You did a wonderful job. I didn't find any mistakes. I look forward to reading the next installment. Have a blessed Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Great reading chapter. It's full of tension, action and keeps me reading. You did a wonderful job. I didn't find any mistakes. I look forward to reading the next installment. Have a blessed Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate you giving it the time. Have a wonderful day!
