Comment from
lindafisher
I see this this is a contest entry. Starting with a question gives the writer so much more scope to develop the story. Poor mommy isn't going to get her gown. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is really appreciated
With regards
Comment from
Carolyn Dooley
This was short and cute. You have a poem in a few words that tell a story.
Keep up the great work. Have a great day. Stay safe. Good luck. If you have entered a contest, I hope you win.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is really appreciated
With regards
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 26-Feb-2022