Freedom
A glimpse at my idea of freedom13 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I liked your poem and your message. I admire your work with the acrostic format. (I can't do it!) Thank you for sharing this poem. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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I liked your poem and your message. I admire your work with the acrostic format. (I can't do it!) Thank you for sharing this poem. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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I didn't think I could either, but I found with free verse it's so much easier.
Thank you for the lovely review and I will return the favor :)
Plus, I'd like to read your acrostic if you want to try. :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
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LOL. No, I'm not going to try an acrostic, but thanks
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Missy,
I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem on Freedom. I agree with you. I always include our military in any poem I write about freedom, for without them we wouldn't have the freedoms we do have. Excellent job and I love the artwork you choose.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Missy,
I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem on Freedom. I agree with you. I always include our military in any poem I write about freedom, for without them we wouldn't have the freedoms we do have. Excellent job and I love the artwork you choose.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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?m sorry it?s taken so long to get to these reviews. Some personal issues in my life.
Please forgive me!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from lauralumummu
Thanks for this, in Canada we have been fighting for ours against all the mandates. Now we have a war in Ukraine, will people ever learn. I love your poem and display but the purple is really hard to see on the black-white would be great. All the best Laura.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thanks for this, in Canada we have been fighting for ours against all the mandates. Now we have a war in Ukraine, will people ever learn. I love your poem and display but the purple is really hard to see on the black-white would be great. All the best Laura.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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?m sorry it?s taken so long to get to these reviews. Some personal issues in my life.
Please forgive me!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from patcelaw
Sadly, today it is possible to vote ourselves into losing our freedom. Hopefully we as a people will be wiser in our voting. Some of the political leaders of today want to control us.
Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Sadly, today it is possible to vote ourselves into losing our freedom. Hopefully we as a people will be wiser in our voting. Some of the political leaders of today want to control us.
Patricia
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I absolutely agree with you.
Thank you for this review :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your acrostic poem is very moving and expressive. The topic of freedom is one that awakens deep emotion in people. Unfortunately, some people insist on claiming freedom that infringes on others' rights. Good job
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Your acrostic poem is very moving and expressive. The topic of freedom is one that awakens deep emotion in people. Unfortunately, some people insist on claiming freedom that infringes on others' rights. Good job
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I believe most Americans are generous with freedom. Thank you for your review and perspective on this piece.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from scongrove
I like how you put this together with such meaning. Freedom should be for everyone, but sadly... it's not. As our world changes, it seems we are losing more and more of it. Our world needs a lot of prayers.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I like how you put this together with such meaning. Freedom should be for everyone, but sadly... it's not. As our world changes, it seems we are losing more and more of it. Our world needs a lot of prayers.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Agreed Shana, prayers are definitely needed. Having said that, I truly believe America needs to concentrate on making our country safe on our southern border and not send our young soldiers halfway around the world to protect others borders.
Thank you for your review and thoughts on this piece, my friend.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You're very welcome. Thanks for writing this. :)
Comment from Jesse James Doty
With the sparkling stars and flag as big as you please, this was a wonderful offering of an acrostic poem! I love each point you made and the order you put them in as well. The whole presentation was fantastic! With the black background and red beginnings of each line along with blue lettering and ending with the white word freedom, this came off as very patriotic and with good reason! This is an excellent contribution to the acrostic poetry contest and I send good wishes for your entry to win!
Have a patriotic weekend!
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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With the sparkling stars and flag as big as you please, this was a wonderful offering of an acrostic poem! I love each point you made and the order you put them in as well. The whole presentation was fantastic! With the black background and red beginnings of each line along with blue lettering and ending with the white word freedom, this came off as very patriotic and with good reason! This is an excellent contribution to the acrostic poetry contest and I send good wishes for your entry to win!
Have a patriotic weekend!
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Jesse for this lovely review :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You're welcome, Missy!
Enjoy the day!
Jesse
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it looks to me that you've summed up freedom with a pretty complete list. But sadly, in places like Ukraine, they don't get to make their own choices. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Well, it looks to me that you've summed up freedom with a pretty complete list. But sadly, in places like Ukraine, they don't get to make their own choices. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi Ric, Thank you for the review and thoughts on this piece. I for one would rather see our troops at our southern border than half a world away protecting someone else's. My own POV.
Always
Justfan of yours and friend I hope
Missy
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good use of the letters of freedom to describe the different kinds of freedom and our need for it. I like the patriotic artwork and font colors.
I think recently it has been shown that some in society need more respect for others.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is a good use of the letters of freedom to describe the different kinds of freedom and our need for it. I like the patriotic artwork and font colors.
I think recently it has been shown that some in society need more respect for others.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you, DP for leaving this awesome review and your POV of the word.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You're welcome on both accounts, Missy.
Joan
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo! Yes, I agree we are all created equal and should be bound by the same rules and regulations. There should not be any pick or choosing for this man or that one. Our society should pull together for the betterment of all. That's freedom for all!
Beautiful poem!
Smiles. Carol
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Bravo! Yes, I agree we are all created equal and should be bound by the same rules and regulations. There should not be any pick or choosing for this man or that one. Our society should pull together for the betterment of all. That's freedom for all!
Beautiful poem!
Smiles. Carol
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Another great take on this piece, my friend. You're such a gifted writer and friend. Hugs
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
