Wisdom
poetry contest16 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Patricia,
We hope to learn from each mistake we make. The first mistake we make will most probably not be our last. If we learn from our first maybe will start start a pattern.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Patricia,
We hope to learn from each mistake we make. The first mistake we make will most probably not be our last. If we learn from our first maybe will start start a pattern.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your review.
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No problem, Patricia.
Joan
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You took a difficult challenge and created a wise and creative poem.
Very well done.
A great presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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You took a difficult challenge and created a wise and creative poem.
Very well done.
A great presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
So true, Patricia. You did a great job with your well chosen meaningful words. Your message is clear. The image is supporting. In 7 words, you expressed something everyone should know and believe.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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So true, Patricia. You did a great job with your well chosen meaningful words. Your message is clear. The image is supporting. In 7 words, you expressed something everyone should know and believe.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Patricia.
-You have used these few words well with a good topic.
-I like the quote you made with them.
-It has a very good message, and I
like the idea of learning from "the first mistake."
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Patricia.
-You have used these few words well with a good topic.
-I like the quote you made with them.
-It has a very good message, and I
like the idea of learning from "the first mistake."
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a clever saying you have invented. Furthermore, at seven words it clearly falls within the requirement of the 8 Words or Less Poem contest. With one word spare, you could of course make it even stronger using "the wisest people..."
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is a clever saying you have invented. Furthermore, at seven words it clearly falls within the requirement of the 8 Words or Less Poem contest. With one word spare, you could of course make it even stronger using "the wisest people..."
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from BethShelby
Excellent entry for the 8 word contest. This is true but there are a lot of people that have to keep learning over and over again. Especially the ones who keep marrying abusive me. They keep things I can change them. Things will be different this time.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the 8 word contest. This is true but there are a lot of people that have to keep learning over and over again. Especially the ones who keep marrying abusive me. They keep things I can change them. Things will be different this time.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Aussie
A very good entry for the contest. We are not infallible, on earth to learn from our mistakes and try not to make the same one again! Good luck in the contest my friend. K xx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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A very good entry for the contest. We are not infallible, on earth to learn from our mistakes and try not to make the same one again! Good luck in the contest my friend. K xx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, that is probably true, but also not easy to do. Seven words of wisdom from you Patricia. These short poems take a bit of thought, good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Yes, that is probably true, but also not easy to do. Seven words of wisdom from you Patricia. These short poems take a bit of thought, good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from justafan
Truer words were never spoken, Pat. This is a hard lesson to learn for some of us. I love the picture choice and the colors used. I wish you well in the contest.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Truer words were never spoken, Pat. This is a hard lesson to learn for some of us. I love the picture choice and the colors used. I wish you well in the contest.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made good use of these mere eight required words to convey a powerful message. People talk about learning from mistakeS. Learning from the first one would offset a lot of grief.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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You have made good use of these mere eight required words to convey a powerful message. People talk about learning from mistakeS. Learning from the first one would offset a lot of grief.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
