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My life after meeting Jim.

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Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Alie Wow you sound like you have done heaps and it was interesting to read about Jims adventures as well
I must try to go back and find all your other posts re your life
At the moment I am procrastinating about doing housework lol My husband is out getting wood and I am wasting time lol
Summer about to finish in a few days although hoping for a warm Autumn still need a sunbake ha ha
All good here Still working once a week A 5 hour shift just enough now , not far off retirement for me
Anyway Alie I enjoyed this post
Keep safe xx Cheers Chris


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
    Thank you so much Christine for reviewing and your fantastic comments, hey, life is about procastinating, lol.
reply by Chrissy710 on 27-Feb-2022
    Ha ha Still at it
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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A Continuation of Our Adventures
by aryr

Hello, Aryr,

I enjoyed reading about Jim's trip to Catalina. I think it would be fun to travel for work. Of course it's not as much fun as a vacation, but a nice change. I feel bad for the bison.

Blessed be. Hugs :)





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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
    Thank you so much, Gypsy for reviewing and you amazing comments. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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Alie, you've given us a good idea of what life is like on Catalina Island. Did you get to see it another time? It sounds interesting. I know I'm late getting to this so maybe you've already been told there are a couple of incomplete sentences:

"He and two others, Terry (a female) and her husband Mike, who were to arrive (on) Friday am." - I think you need to leave out the "who", if you meant all three of them were to arrive on Friday.

"The restaurants were different as were the shops, they (which instead of they will make it a complete sentence) were only open when..."

Hope you find this helpful.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
    Thank you so much for reviewing this, judiverse, and your great comments. I will fix those in a moment.
Comment from royowen
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I'm so glad you were able to write some more, about where Jim had been, I've heard of Catalina island even from where I live here. Tragic about the Bison, we've got Bison here in Australia, mind you, it's only 500, with some in the zoos, beautifully written Alie, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Thank you so much, Roy for reviewing and your great comments. I did not know about the Bison. This was a replacement to the one I wrote about Jim's adventures and if I had of thought before I would have added it as a continuation of our adventures. Dumb me. Blessings.
reply by royowen on 24-Feb-2022
    I still enjoyed it Alie
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Amen to that, Roy, blessings.
Comment from lyenochka
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I remember reading about Jim's trip to Catalina. Did you post this one before? I was sad to hear about moving those poor bison to North Dakota. What were they thinking? They got used to Californian temperatures! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Yes, Helene, I did post it before, then thought I should have included it in the book, darn I should have thought of it before.
Comment from damommy
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Sounds like a lovely place to be, but has a lot of limitations, such as restaurants only open for cruises. I'd love having the deer come around. I know you were glad to have him home!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Thank you so much Yvonne, I had already written about Jim and Catalina then I thought I should take it out of a stand alone and put it in the book. Darn I should have thought of that first.
reply by damommy on 24-Feb-2022
    You thought of it now, and that's good. 8-)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    LOL, better late than never.