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War and Rumors of War

Our World Today, But What about Tomorrow?

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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A good introduction for your account:
"It's more than a war that we are facing, it's a deep and evil spiritual warfare." You have expressed this well. "There will be signs in the sun, moon, and stars. On the earth, nations will be in anguish and perplexity at the roaring and tossing of the sea"

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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I like you comparing the three lights to the trinity. Your story is short but full of meaning especially in the current situation. We do not know where the world is heading but all we can do is pray. Let us kneel, bow down and pray. Thanks for sharing, Kit

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
    Thank you for the 6 star review. Yes, I believe it is a sign.
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for sharing your prayer and Scripture. I also join you to pray for that family in Ukraine. I know people with family there. It's certainly both physical and spiritual warfare. The photograph is fabulous!

I am not sure why you posted this under a Script as this feels more like an essay.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
    I tried to switch it, and make it not a script, but couldn't figure out how to do that. Sorry. But thanks for the great review.
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Bobby Jo, so good to see you my sweet friend...

I am sickened by this war...those poor people and what they are going through...it's just wrong...my prayers are with them...

I do believe sweet girl...God is cleaning house...
I don't understand why things are done the way they are...but what I do believe is all this is in God's master plan for us...and God is good...

He sent His son here knowing He was going the die on the cross...but He had to use the evil of Judas to get Jesus to the cross...I believe He uses evil to make His plans...but He uses good to complete His plans...as He did with to cross...we now have Jesus in our lives...nothing can compare...

we have evil working against us...but God will make
it good...we just have to trust Him...

I love your story told sweet girl...and love this picture...
gives you a chill...very well written...love you girl...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
    Thank you my friend. I don't get on here very often. But it always great to fall back to old friends. May God bless you, Amen!
reply by l.raven on 25-Feb-2022
    your sooooo welcome my sweet friend...
    I go of and on myself...just have so many other things to do....May God Bless you too..
    love xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
    Thank you, my sweet friend. Prayers for all the families in Ukraine. Hugs
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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A sun dog sky. Beautiful.
Well written piece. Good job. Thanks for writing.
Russia (Putin) is horrible and in need of prayer. Imagine if he found God! The Russian people are duped, or beaten down. The Ukrainians are in a sad place.
God bless you.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Thank you may we all hold hands and pray, as I feel this is written in the bible as the last days.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you for sharing this commentary. Truly the news from Ukraine is discouraging, but one thing we know for sure, God is still in control. I believe the time of His returning is very near.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Thank you, me too. Prayers.
reply by Anne Johnston on 25-Feb-2022
    You are welcome
Comment from patcelaw
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We all should keep our eyes on the eastern skies and listen for the sounding trumpet for the return of the Lord. As much as I want to have more time to speak to others about the Lord, I am so ready to meet Him in the air.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Yes we should. Thanks for a wonderful review
Comment from lindafisher
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Well Bobby Jo. You have voiced all the feelins we have concerning this dreadful event. Again it's down to power and greed. God help these poor people. I hope you friends come through this.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Thank you for your prayers and review.
Comment from lancellot
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Hmm, there many different subjects written within this. Some overlap, some do not.

1) This is not written in a script format. That is something you should edit immediately if you can.

2) You may want to narrow the scope of what you want to speak on.

3) If you write this as standard prose, rewrite it with proper paragraph formatting. Your ideas and message will come across better to the readers.

Good luck to. With a little more work, I think you will have a gem


A {convoy} is about to happen in the USA.

- you may want a different word here.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    thank you
    I appreciate the feedback, couldn't change the script format


reply by lancellot on 24-Feb-2022
    You can ask Tom to change it to general fiction prose.