The Waterfall
A Quatern27 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You did a super job with your quatern because the repeated line is fresh in each stanza and flows smoothly from line to line. There is something beautiful about sensing God's presence in Nature.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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You did a super job with your quatern because the repeated line is fresh in each stanza and flows smoothly from line to line. There is something beautiful about sensing God's presence in Nature.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Absolutely. Thank you.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, Yvonne, your poem practically sings! I adored it! I can just imagine how beautiful it would be inside the waterfalls -- like a cathedral indeed! Even that last stanza, that one might think would be spooky, wasn't -- it was other-worldly, but spiritual.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Ah, Yvonne, your poem practically sings! I adored it! I can just imagine how beautiful it would be inside the waterfalls -- like a cathedral indeed! Even that last stanza, that one might think would be spooky, wasn't -- it was other-worldly, but spiritual.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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I'm so glad you could see that. Thank you so much, Dawn, for this wonderful review.
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It was my pleasure, Yvonne.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. The photo you chose set the mood immediately. Your descriptive words made me feel as though I was gazing up at the waterfall. I felt the midst on my cheeks. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The photo you chose set the mood immediately. Your descriptive words made me feel as though I was gazing up at the waterfall. I felt the midst on my cheeks. Well done!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you! I'm glad it made you feel that way.
Comment from Ben Colder
Would be lucky if the thing didn't freeze. Good poem. Are you guys getting any snow up there where you are? Colder than a mother-in-law kiss here.
Stay warm, Arkie.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Would be lucky if the thing didn't freeze. Good poem. Are you guys getting any snow up there where you are? Colder than a mother-in-law kiss here.
Stay warm, Arkie.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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We've had ice for two days, and yes, it's that cold here. Never can tell, though, it will probably be 70 degrees tomorrow. Weird weather.
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Like the old-timers, they were said. Stick around, and the weather will change. Stay warm, Arkie.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the repeating waterfall to life in your poem here and there is something quite powerful about the strength of a waterfall, the noise and the eagerness can make us wake up to nature, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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You brought the repeating waterfall to life in your poem here and there is something quite powerful about the strength of a waterfall, the noise and the eagerness can make us wake up to nature, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I think there's something mystic about a waterfall. Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your refrain line really accentuates the
Lovely roar of waterfalls. Nicely described in this quatern poem Yvonne. I think waterfalls, whether a trickle or masses of water, are always wonderful to see and this one pictured looks spectacular.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Your refrain line really accentuates the
Lovely roar of waterfalls. Nicely described in this quatern poem Yvonne. I think waterfalls, whether a trickle or masses of water, are always wonderful to see and this one pictured looks spectacular.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you. I think they are a bit mystic sometimes. Always soothing.
Comment from karenina
You make it look easy... Sign of your talent to be sure! Your phrasing is delicate...like a wayward breeze, stirring my smile! Seamless weaving of that repeating line!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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You make it look easy... Sign of your talent to be sure! Your phrasing is delicate...like a wayward breeze, stirring my smile! Seamless weaving of that repeating line!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the lovely comments!
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Hugs!
Comment from Bill Schott
This quatern, The Waterfall, has the proper formatting and finds the spiritual connection with both nature and God in this peaceful yet powerful scene. Nice.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This quatern, The Waterfall, has the proper formatting and finds the spiritual connection with both nature and God in this peaceful yet powerful scene. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you. Waterfalls invoke many feelings, I think.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The words are as beautiful as the picture. It makes you feel like you are there and alive. The peaceful feelings can be felt just looking at the picture. Thank you for posting such a great poem.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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The words are as beautiful as the picture. It makes you feel like you are there and alive. The peaceful feelings can be felt just looking at the picture. Thank you for posting such a great poem.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reviewing it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' The Waterfall ' , is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with crat and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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' The Waterfall ' , is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with crat and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you.
You're very welcome.