Lord, Bless My Soul
Based on Psalm 10312 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Hi Patricia, it's good to see you again my friend. You are missed my friend. I love this as a profound prayer to one who will always listen to the petitions and requests of His redeemed, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Hi Patricia, it's good to see you again my friend. You are missed my friend. I love this as a profound prayer to one who will always listen to the petitions and requests of His redeemed, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the fine review.
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Most welcome
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Roy, it is very difficult for me to write because of serious vision problems.
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I?m so sorry Patricia, I?ll pray
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem! You used very good and true words. I love the beautiful imagery! Thank you so much for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem! You used very good and true words. I love the beautiful imagery! Thank you so much for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the fine review.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a wonderful poetic retelling of the psalm. It is a strong prayer that we are always in God's mercy it we are repentant and loving. We want to get a positive judgement from Him when we get to the pearly gates.
I like that the poem is shaped like a diamond to show the value of faith.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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This is a wonderful poetic retelling of the psalm. It is a strong prayer that we are always in God's mercy it we are repentant and loving. We want to get a positive judgement from Him when we get to the pearly gates.
I like that the poem is shaped like a diamond to show the value of faith.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review.
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My pleasure, Pat.
Joan
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A truly beautiful heart felt prayer. I am not really familiar with the Psalms however I can at least say this is a moving and powerful prayer.
Blessings
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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A truly beautiful heart felt prayer. I am not really familiar with the Psalms however I can at least say this is a moving and powerful prayer.
Blessings
Mary
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Aussie
Busy writer, second one I have read tonight. Did you paint the flowers for your prayer? I am an artist myself. Beautiful. A lovely poem of praise for the Lord. I found His peace and wisdom more so after my accident. May not be able to walk, He always gives us more when the world takes away. K xx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Busy writer, second one I have read tonight. Did you paint the flowers for your prayer? I am an artist myself. Beautiful. A lovely poem of praise for the Lord. I found His peace and wisdom more so after my accident. May not be able to walk, He always gives us more when the world takes away. K xx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review. This will be on of the poems in my new book of poetry.
Comment from juliaSjames
I took your heartfelt poem as a message to re-read Psalm 103. Thank you for posting your words. May God bless you and grant you the desires of your heart, Patricia.
The artwork is lovely. Is it yours?
Stay safe
Julia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I took your heartfelt poem as a message to re-read Psalm 103. Thank you for posting your words. May God bless you and grant you the desires of your heart, Patricia.
The artwork is lovely. Is it yours?
Stay safe
Julia
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review. Yes, the artwork is mine. This will b3e in the new book I will publish.
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Good luck with your new book Patricia
Comment from BethShelby
This is beautiful in form and substance. The picture goes well with it. The prayer is so sincere and full of so much meaning. I know the Lord will hear and honor it.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This is beautiful in form and substance. The picture goes well with it. The prayer is so sincere and full of so much meaning. I know the Lord will hear and honor it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from James Ott
Nicely done, a fervent prayer. I am attracted to the hierarchy of the poem, the recognition that this person has of her own being and who she is worshiping. I sense that the author has been hurt by her physical problems. But I feel that her spirit and her prayers will win her a good place.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Nicely done, a fervent prayer. I am attracted to the hierarchy of the poem, the recognition that this person has of her own being and who she is worshiping. I sense that the author has been hurt by her physical problems. But I feel that her spirit and her prayers will win her a good place.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like your poem based on Psalm 103. The Lord blesses us in so many ways and how often we forget to give Him thanks. There is a scripture that says He inhabits our praise, so it is important to spend time praising Him.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I like your poem based on Psalm 103. The Lord blesses us in so many ways and how often we forget to give Him thanks. There is a scripture that says He inhabits our praise, so it is important to spend time praising Him.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your nice review.
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You are welcome
Comment from judiverse
Lovely artwork. This makes an attractive presentation on the page, the way it is centered. Wonderful expression of forgiveness and redemption that you have found. No need for a comma after the second line. judi
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Lovely artwork. This makes an attractive presentation on the page, the way it is centered. Wonderful expression of forgiveness and redemption that you have found. No need for a comma after the second line. judi
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your nice review. I removed the comma.
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You're welcome. You really didn't need that comma. judi
