"The Book of Death"
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5 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Wow, you have more than earned a six with this crazy story. It is a bit on the morbid side, but I loved it. It is so creative and well-written that I can find no faults with it. I will certainly read the next chapter. I hope you win the chess game.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Wow, you have more than earned a six with this crazy story. It is a bit on the morbid side, but I loved it. It is so creative and well-written that I can find no faults with it. I will certainly read the next chapter. I hope you win the chess game.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Well thanks country ranch writer for reading this part and the final part?
Yes, is now been posted.
And, I hope you enjoy it.
Ricky
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a dark piece my friend. While I find the way you write interesting. I have to tell you even with the appropriate warnings in place, the phrase "Dirty Muslim" will most certainly be dominantly offensive to most people. It certainly is your freedom to express your thoughts and words, but only if they fit the piece. Blessings?
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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This is a dark piece my friend. While I find the way you write interesting. I have to tell you even with the appropriate warnings in place, the phrase "Dirty Muslim" will most certainly be dominantly offensive to most people. It certainly is your freedom to express your thoughts and words, but only if they fit the piece. Blessings?
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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First off I'll tell you that I'm not a racist.
And secondly the piece determined with reference to 9-11, the type of story it's about plus also the type of book that it's in.
That the dirty Muslim reference works well with it.
I'm sure all the remaining families of the over 2,000 deaths that day on the twin towers.
Yes, would agree with the word dirty Muslim.
And, they would probably have something a little bit filthier to say about it?
Don't you think John and blessings to you!
And thanks for your time and reviews.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
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My intent was not to label you as a racist my friend. It was merely to point out what maybe you didn't see. I felt as I read that that it was an all-encompassing, slur and not an intentional one on your part. I'm sorry if I offended you, it wasn't my purpose. Apologies!
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Pretty bluebirds just reviewed this gave it six stars and said it deserved much better!
She also stated she can't wait until the end and hope that I win the game of chess again Satan.
Thanks for the apology it wasn't necessary.
Rick
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Rick, I didn't say your work wasn't deserving... I was simply pointing out a blip that maybe you didn't see. Not everyone has the same views, or notices the same things. Please don't take this as a personal attack. You are talented and interesting.
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I just completed this and I hope you enjoy it!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
Hell is only half full and people continue to end up there for their being stupid or just not caring what in the hell happens to them one way or another. Satan laughs at your stupidity.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Hell is only half full and people continue to end up there for their being stupid or just not caring what in the hell happens to them one way or another. Satan laughs at your stupidity.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Well see if you think the next half is kind of funny I tried to make it that way country ranch writer?
Doctor Ricky
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Comment from webfoot
Yes, Ricky. This is a unique look at the Devil and hell which is quite prominent in our lives right now, i think. the pandemic has really "flipped the world" around and i feel people are being faced with "important decisions" right now.
you get this across in your way here, Ricky
good job
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Yes, Ricky. This is a unique look at the Devil and hell which is quite prominent in our lives right now, i think. the pandemic has really "flipped the world" around and i feel people are being faced with "important decisions" right now.
you get this across in your way here, Ricky
good job
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks webfoot for your time and review.
And, I Love writing about Hell.
Yes, since I've been there Twice.
First with the loss of my son and then 8 months later with the loss of my wife!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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sorry Ricky. yes that's hell
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
The words were too small for me to read but what I gathered was it was good I wish you well keep it up stay focused and dedicated have a beautiful day
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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The words were too small for me to read but what I gathered was it was good I wish you well keep it up stay focused and dedicated have a beautiful day
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks for coming for a journey into Hell!
Yes, and be sure to come back later for the second part of it!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"