Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Well, the structure was neat. I enjoyed how you rhymed each five lines. Being an old salt, I thought, why have a man in a crows' nest in port?.. and yet I still rate it a five.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022

Thanks for your comments Tom. I appreciate your feedback. X

Comment from Rachel Jamerson1

Excellent

Interesting read. Great detail. Your words paint a clear picture of the setting. They also tell a familiar story concerning the time of pirates. Good job.

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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022

Thanks Rachel for reading my poem. X

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I truly enjoy a good pirate tale. This one sets the scene as a few pirates are left on board after most went into town..it's easy to visualize the king's men attacking in the middle of the night, stealing the gold, leaving no witnesses and destroying the ship. I am looking forward to the pirates' revenge. Rod

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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022

Thanks Rod for a great review. X