Pirates (Part one)
A two part story poem.33 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
****** six virtual stars as I don't have any! I loved this and wait for part 2. You certainly are a deft hand at writing rhyme and telling a story. The whole story rocked with rhythm. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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****** six virtual stars as I don't have any! I loved this and wait for part 2. You certainly are a deft hand at writing rhyme and telling a story. The whole story rocked with rhythm. Well done poet.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and the virtual 6 means a lot. XT
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I like two part story poem. For, it
gives you more room to be creative. And
you proved just that. And i was impressed.
Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to
talk. For, there is always something new on
deck. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I like two part story poem. For, it
gives you more room to be creative. And
you proved just that. And i was impressed.
Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to
talk. For, there is always something new on
deck. Stay Connected
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you dear reader for your kind review. X
Comment from Boogienights
What an exciting tale! I can't wait for part 2 when the pirates get thier revenge. This poem flows well and really grabs and keeps the attention of the reader. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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What an exciting tale! I can't wait for part 2 when the pirates get thier revenge. This poem flows well and really grabs and keeps the attention of the reader. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. X
Comment from billscott
A most excellent poem, and very enjoyable. And it is a pleasant surprise to see you borrow m image for this fine written piece! I am looking forward to part two! Excellent work!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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A most excellent poem, and very enjoyable. And it is a pleasant surprise to see you borrow m image for this fine written piece! I am looking forward to part two! Excellent work!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and the 6 stars. But most of all thank you for the image, it is perfect for the poem. X
Comment from nomi338
And so the carnage continues. Retribution follows one slaughter with another one. Will it ever end? Not as long as greed spurs the murderous actions of men who will do anything for money and what it brings.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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And so the carnage continues. Retribution follows one slaughter with another one. Will it ever end? Not as long as greed spurs the murderous actions of men who will do anything for money and what it brings.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. X
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was great. The imagery was very vivid and it was easy to imagine the situation. The story was also interesting and am looking forward to part 2.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This was great. The imagery was very vivid and it was easy to imagine the situation. The story was also interesting and am looking forward to part 2.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. X
Comment from mermaids
This is a marvelous story in a poem. Your words read like a mini movie and I am looking forward to part two. Excellent use of rhyming words that makes your poem smooth to read out loud. Your vivid use of words shows the King's men attacking the ship.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This is a marvelous story in a poem. Your words read like a mini movie and I am looking forward to part two. Excellent use of rhyming words that makes your poem smooth to read out loud. Your vivid use of words shows the King's men attacking the ship.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind review. X
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Linda, you should have released this on Sunday, it is an outstanding example of how to write a story in a poem, with a brilliantly smooth, articulate and flowing poem, with a conclusion to this saga well anticipated, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : by (all) the kings men.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Beautifully written Linda, you should have released this on Sunday, it is an outstanding example of how to write a story in a poem, with a brilliantly smooth, articulate and flowing poem, with a conclusion to this saga well anticipated, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : by (all) the kings men.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thanks Roy. Always look forward to hearing from you. X
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Bless you Linda
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Why Sunday Roy?. X
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Maybe more 6s that?s all, good poem.
Comment from dragonpoet
Linda,
This is a well told story in rhyme. I like the rhyme scheme. It helps the plot go quickly. It seemed the captain had a lot to worry about. It seems greedy and heartless for the pirates to be avenging just their treasure and not their captain and first mate and ship.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Linda,
This is a well told story in rhyme. I like the rhyme scheme. It helps the plot go quickly. It seemed the captain had a lot to worry about. It seems greedy and heartless for the pirates to be avenging just their treasure and not their captain and first mate and ship.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Joan for your kind review. X
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My pleasure, Linda.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I really enjoyed this pirate write and your well thought out descriptions painted a lively picture of the skulduggery aboard this ship, the rum swilling pirates, the cutlasses and the creaking timbers. I thought your metre started off really well but a few lines were slightly uneven, but I still enjoyed it enough to give you a six Linda, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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I really enjoyed this pirate write and your well thought out descriptions painted a lively picture of the skulduggery aboard this ship, the rum swilling pirates, the cutlasses and the creaking timbers. I thought your metre started off really well but a few lines were slightly uneven, but I still enjoyed it enough to give you a six Linda, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Dolly for such a great review and 6 stars. I really appreciate it.
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Well deserved Linda x x x
