Pirates (Part one)
A two part story poem.33 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Very well done. I throughly enjoyed it. When is part two coming? I have a few free photo sites for you. Unsplash, Vecteezy and the motherload of all sites: Pinterest. Acknowledge where you get the photos from in your author notes is all you have to do.
Good luck. Karen
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Very well done. I throughly enjoyed it. When is part two coming? I have a few free photo sites for you. Unsplash, Vecteezy and the motherload of all sites: Pinterest. Acknowledge where you get the photos from in your author notes is all you have to do.
Good luck. Karen
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for reviewing my work and for your kind suggestions.
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:-)
Comment from Melbelles
This is amazing!! You must of put a lot of thought into this. This reminds me of when my mom would tell me stories as a child, and I'm on the edge of my seat. It has an excellent flow and rhyming scheme. It couldn't be any any better. Well done!!
May your pen continue to be blessed,
Melbelles
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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This is amazing!! You must of put a lot of thought into this. This reminds me of when my mom would tell me stories as a child, and I'm on the edge of my seat. It has an excellent flow and rhyming scheme. It couldn't be any any better. Well done!!
May your pen continue to be blessed,
Melbelles
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review. X
Comment from juliaSjames
The King's men seem more ruthless than pirates.. Exceptional rhyme and meter in this well told tale of days of yore.. Looking forward to Part 2, The Revenge of the Pirates..
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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The King's men seem more ruthless than pirates.. Exceptional rhyme and meter in this well told tale of days of yore.. Looking forward to Part 2, The Revenge of the Pirates..
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you Julia for this super review and 6 stars. Appreciate both. X
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed your story poem. I don't know that I've ever read that before. I enjoyed the pace of your poem and the use of imagery. I felt as though I was on the ship.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed your story poem. I don't know that I've ever read that before. I enjoyed the pace of your poem and the use of imagery. I felt as though I was on the ship.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind review. X
Comment from Terry Broxson
Part one is very good, I look forward to part two. I love the rhymes. I like to read it out loud and hear the sounds and flow of the words. It has a good cadence to it. The story is good also. I am assuming part two is the revenge. Good work.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Part one is very good, I look forward to part two. I love the rhymes. I like to read it out loud and hear the sounds and flow of the words. It has a good cadence to it. The story is good also. I am assuming part two is the revenge. Good work.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Terry. Much appreciated. X
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Visions of Robert Louis Stevenson!
"and that's when they saw" - works if you're British, I suppose (lol)
It's funny, what actions become 'pay back' ... I hit you 'cause you hit me, 'cause I hit you, 'cause you hit me, 'cause ...
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Visions of Robert Louis Stevenson!
"and that's when they saw" - works if you're British, I suppose (lol)
It's funny, what actions become 'pay back' ... I hit you 'cause you hit me, 'cause I hit you, 'cause you hit me, 'cause ...
Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Wayne. X
Comment from Heather Burroughs
What a wonderful story in a poem. Fantastic work. Everything read well and easily. Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you and your loved ones
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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What a wonderful story in a poem. Fantastic work. Everything read well and easily. Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you and your loved ones
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Heather for your kind review. X
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent story in a poem! Smooth metre and rhyme, and a good flow. I would suggest capitals for Wild Boar in your last stanza as it is the name of an inn. (It's correct in the second stanza.) looking forward to reading the next part.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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An excellent story in a poem! Smooth metre and rhyme, and a good flow. I would suggest capitals for Wild Boar in your last stanza as it is the name of an inn. (It's correct in the second stanza.) looking forward to reading the next part.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Wendy for your kind review. X
Comment from karenina
A perfect example of a story in a poem! I could almost hear this as a wild seafarer's song, raised rum, and booming voices! The more dangerous and wilder, the better! Your rhyme moves the action forward at an ever-increasing pace. I was swept up in your tale! Bring on part two!
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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A perfect example of a story in a poem! I could almost hear this as a wild seafarer's song, raised rum, and booming voices! The more dangerous and wilder, the better! Your rhyme moves the action forward at an ever-increasing pace. I was swept up in your tale! Bring on part two!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Karenina for your kind review. X
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My pleasure!
Comment from zanya
Wow! a rollicking good tale ( perhaps it's actually true' told with such vigor and verve but it's the language of that era of piracy in which it is clothed that brings it to life on the page - a job so well done !
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Wow! a rollicking good tale ( perhaps it's actually true' told with such vigor and verve but it's the language of that era of piracy in which it is clothed that brings it to life on the page - a job so well done !
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Zanya for this great review and the amazing 6 stars. X
