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"Poetry from the Broken Heart"

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Comment from joann r romei
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This was very profound, it read from the heart and I hope that you find the peace you deserve, life is hell and you have been through much, i will pray for you,

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
    Sometimes when I write I don't really try very hard I just let it come in and Flow.
    Occasionally I put more effort to it like I did with this one.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I thoroughly enjoyed this story fueled by many elements of poetry. I actually consider it to be a finer quality of writing than your longer poems.
I especially liked these words:
I am currently awake and wondering why?
When all I want to do is die.
That recurred like an evil refrain. Very well done!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
    A good poet can utilize griefing depression for the great poet?
    Can take all of those tools and turn it into a masterpiece!
    Thanks for commenting and reviewing this.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Charity Stewart
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Love the rhymes and emotions in this poem. Well written. I could say you sound suicidal like mines but instead I take it as you are expressing yourself and venting. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
    Why thank you very much for stopping by and taking the time to read and review this Charity.
    Doctor Ricky 1024