Rivers of time
A poem.51 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Well you never know what us around the next Ben unless you go there but some times it is not the best way.when you come to the cross roads sometimes it is best not to take the road mist are taking. Your life is in your hands choose wisely ot it may not be what you want.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Well you never know what us around the next Ben unless you go there but some times it is not the best way.when you come to the cross roads sometimes it is best not to take the road mist are taking. Your life is in your hands choose wisely ot it may not be what you want.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Roy, beautifully penned spiritual writing. Your lines and verses flow
swiftly with silken rhymes and vivid imagery. I especially liked:
My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes.
(The essence of this poem)
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Hello Roy, beautifully penned spiritual writing. Your lines and verses flow
swiftly with silken rhymes and vivid imagery. I especially liked:
My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes.
(The essence of this poem)
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks Margaret, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an excellent, deeply spiritual poem. Through vivid descriptions, including some very expressive figure of speech, you have conveyed a powerful message about time--and how little clock-time means to God.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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This is an excellent, deeply spiritual poem. Through vivid descriptions, including some very expressive figure of speech, you have conveyed a powerful message about time--and how little clock-time means to God.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Janice, for these wonderful comments a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Raul, for these wonderful comments a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
Another beautiful post :) The artwork is breathtaking.
The last paragraph really caught my eye.
If faith was just an empty shell,
then trust is like a nightmare's hell.
But I will dream of cloudless skies,
where visions mount hope's vict'ry cries.
I really enjoy how much thought you put into your writing. It shows how many life lessons you have learned and all the meanings of each one.
Thanks for sharing them with us.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Another beautiful post :) The artwork is breathtaking.
The last paragraph really caught my eye.
If faith was just an empty shell,
then trust is like a nightmare's hell.
But I will dream of cloudless skies,
where visions mount hope's vict'ry cries.
I really enjoy how much thought you put into your writing. It shows how many life lessons you have learned and all the meanings of each one.
Thanks for sharing them with us.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks dear Girl you rock
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Yes, I definitely hear where you are coming from in this poem.
And I liked the direction from beginning to end. For, one can
only make it via the spiritual. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Yes, I definitely hear where you are coming from in this poem.
And I liked the direction from beginning to end. For, one can
only make it via the spiritual. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for these wonderful comments a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from John Ciarmello
Your words are here are beautiful and well chosen. this piece read like a cherry sliding down a mountain of ice cream. How well done and thoughtful a piece, Roy.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Your words are here are beautiful and well chosen. this piece read like a cherry sliding down a mountain of ice cream. How well done and thoughtful a piece, Roy.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much John, for these wonderful comments a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is beautiful. I love this verse: "some spent on peaks, some deserts dry". This is a deeply spiritual poem that speaks to all of us. It has that universal appeal. Nice author's notes as well.
Thanks mate
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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This is beautiful. I love this verse: "some spent on peaks, some deserts dry". This is a deeply spiritual poem that speaks to all of us. It has that universal appeal. Nice author's notes as well.
Thanks mate
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from mrsmajor
Hi,
Yes trust in God is best indeed...it's part of what we're
taught as we read the Bible scriptures...and you have told that story so well with your rhymed quatrain verses... I too will dream of cloudless skies where vision mount hope's vict'ry cries...I love that line, Roy, it's meaningful beyond compare. This was a beautiful write, along with the scriptures you have noted, most of which I have read more than once....God Bless you, my friends, you and your family...Stay Well..
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Hi,
Yes trust in God is best indeed...it's part of what we're
taught as we read the Bible scriptures...and you have told that story so well with your rhymed quatrain verses... I too will dream of cloudless skies where vision mount hope's vict'ry cries...I love that line, Roy, it's meaningful beyond compare. This was a beautiful write, along with the scriptures you have noted, most of which I have read more than once....God Bless you, my friends, you and your family...Stay Well..
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Victoria, for these wonderful comments a terrific review, blessings Roy
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My Pleasure Roy,
Comment from BethShelby
Worrying about the future is pointless because we aren't meant to know everything that lies ahead. Actually worry itself is pointless because as the adage goes. "Worry is like a rocking chair. It never gets you anywhere."
I enjoyed reading your poem.
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Worrying about the future is pointless because we aren't meant to know everything that lies ahead. Actually worry itself is pointless because as the adage goes. "Worry is like a rocking chair. It never gets you anywhere."
I enjoyed reading your poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Beth, for these wonderful comments a terrific review, blessings Roy
