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Rivers of time

A poem.

51 total reviews 
Comment from 1Dreamer
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. The words flow and are faith filled. Especially like "We'll never know the road ahead, yet trust is best, be spirit-led. Such an important message to apply in these times.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
    Thanks for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
reply by 1Dreamer on 23-Feb-2022
    Back at you!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
    Thank you so much
Comment from Kayte Ray
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this is such a complete and beautiful piece.
You present your images well
the story comes together easily and it is an enjoyable read that flows easily
I like your rhythm
this is an outstanding piece

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
    Thanks Kayte, for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from JPGeo
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This stuff flows out of you like honey. These are beautiful, natural couplets. We are close enough in age that I know that even the most faith-based life is wrought with a certain restlessness regarding time. Honey, man.
John

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
    Thanks for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
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Your poem always has spirit and is deeply meaningful. Besides being written very well, your deep faith shines through, helping others who may have doubts. Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
    Thanks for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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More than a wisp of wisdom in this one Roy. I myself, don't want to know what is around the bend. As the years speed past we need to embrace each day we can.
Lovely poem Roy, cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
    Thanks Valda for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
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Reverent verse, you lay out faith in breadcrumbs, all are called to gather for the feast! Heaven's time is what makes life eternal!

"My God's a stream, A wind-blown sigh. "

Glory!

Karenina

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
    Thanks Karen,,for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
reply by karenina on 23-Feb-2022
    You're welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for the wonderful meditation, Roy! And praise God that He is eternal and holds all our time. I especially liked:
"My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes."

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
    Thanks Helen,for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from lancellot
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Yes, trusting in God is always a good thing. Not the only thing. It is also true that we do not know what the future brings, but we can prepare for probabilities and set ourselves up for plans.

This is well written and very thought provoking work.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
    Thanks, for these great comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from bhogg
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Great post. Think of all the writings on time. I suppose we all would like to think we control our own time. Nice thought about it all being spirit led.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
    Thanks so much, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Dear Roy,
This is such a fantastic poem. I like the rhythm and the images you write about using time and cloudless skies. I was "down" for a few months and I kept remembering your poems that opined about trusting God. Those words helped.
Excellent work, Roy.
Good luck in all you do.
Cindy

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
    Thanks Cindy, for these outstanding comments a great review and affirmation blessings Roy