Rivers of time
A poem.51 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I really like this one. We are not bound to time, and we are not to be afraid of whatever time may bring to our life. Your message is clear and direct, and very well and thoughtfully composed.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I really like this one. We are not bound to time, and we are not to be afraid of whatever time may bring to our life. Your message is clear and direct, and very well and thoughtfully composed.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks again Wendy for your excellent comments and wise review blessings Roy
Comment from amahra
I love the artwork; it is so colorful and beautiful. Very well-written poem with fantastic rhymes as always. Great job!
"....what future holds behind its mask?" [love this line] I also loved the author's notes and scriptures.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I love the artwork; it is so colorful and beautiful. Very well-written poem with fantastic rhymes as always. Great job!
"....what future holds behind its mask?" [love this line] I also loved the author's notes and scriptures.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Amahra, for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like your poem. We don't know what is ahead of us, what lies behind the mask of Putin. We have to pray and ask God to stop the Russia invasion into Ukraine.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I like your poem. We don't know what is ahead of us, what lies behind the mask of Putin. We have to pray and ask God to stop the Russia invasion into Ukraine.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Rosemary, for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Rivers of time
by royowen
Hello, Ray,
Beautiful rhymed poem about your faith and the concept of time. In truth, we only have the present moment. Your rhymes are not forced and the poem flows nicely. I like the presentation too.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Rivers of time
by royowen
Hello, Ray,
Beautiful rhymed poem about your faith and the concept of time. In truth, we only have the present moment. Your rhymes are not forced and the poem flows nicely. I like the presentation too.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Gypsy, for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
I think it's probably best we don't know what our future will be but when we put our trust in our creator, we can be sure of the end of our story.
Great title and lead in question to draw the reader into the poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I think it's probably best we don't know what our future will be but when we put our trust in our creator, we can be sure of the end of our story.
Great title and lead in question to draw the reader into the poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Janet, for your splendid comments and a kind review blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think we asking ourselves these questions as the pandemic is slowly levelling out. I heard that the Queen has Covid now and I have been lucky to escape it so far. In England all restrictions are lifted now, not sure what it is like in Australia, but it looks like the future could be brighter, rivers of time could be bringing fine experiences to us all, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I think we asking ourselves these questions as the pandemic is slowly levelling out. I heard that the Queen has Covid now and I have been lucky to escape it so far. In England all restrictions are lifted now, not sure what it is like in Australia, but it looks like the future could be brighter, rivers of time could be bringing fine experiences to us all, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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We still have some restrictions but things are easing Dolly, thanks for this great review blessings Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Roy.
-You have written a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the premise and question in the opening verse,
followed by the line about peaks and "deserts dry."
-I like the closing verse, as well.
-A very good poem that I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Roy.
-You have written a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the premise and question in the opening verse,
followed by the line about peaks and "deserts dry."
-I like the closing verse, as well.
-A very good poem that I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Pam,for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
That is where I usually fall short. I struggle with, although, I know it that God works in His time not in our time. One would think I would eventually get it right, but I do struggle.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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That is where I usually fall short. I struggle with, although, I know it that God works in His time not in our time. One would think I would eventually get it right, but I do struggle.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Barbara, you?re a Martha, you are unique, and Jesus adored her, she was a "doer" as you are, nothing wrong with that. Just remember Sarah, she helped God.) Thanks dear girl, for your great review blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
Despite our current situation, the future God's word promises is bright indeed. Not so for the unbeliever, the persecutor, the ungodly. Execution will be certain and swift. Acceptance of last second confessions are highly doubtful. There has been sufficient time for the unbeliever to have come to know and accept the truth. May God have mercy on the souls of those who stubbornly refuse to accept the truth.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Despite our current situation, the future God's word promises is bright indeed. Not so for the unbeliever, the persecutor, the ungodly. Execution will be certain and swift. Acceptance of last second confessions are highly doubtful. There has been sufficient time for the unbeliever to have come to know and accept the truth. May God have mercy on the souls of those who stubbornly refuse to accept the truth.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Bro, for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
Rivers of time - I like that phrase. These last two years have changed how we think of time, since we are not able to do a lot of things we were used to. I firmly believe that our time is in God's hands, and just commit every day to Him, asking that His will be done.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Rivers of time - I like that phrase. These last two years have changed how we think of time, since we are not able to do a lot of things we were used to. I firmly believe that our time is in God's hands, and just commit every day to Him, asking that His will be done.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Anne, for your sage comments and confirming review blessings Roy
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You are welcome
