Rivers of time
A poem.51 total reviews
Comment from Lordinajamjar
The words in this poem, Roy, reflect a true testament to your faith.
The sentiment is delivered as matter of fact not in a "preachy" way.
May you long continue to enjoy your journey.
Best
John
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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The words in this poem, Roy, reflect a true testament to your faith.
The sentiment is delivered as matter of fact not in a "preachy" way.
May you long continue to enjoy your journey.
Best
John
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. The photo you chose and color story set the mood immediately. Your message is a strong, yet your writing is gentle. Well done
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The photo you chose and color story set the mood immediately. Your message is a strong, yet your writing is gentle. Well done
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from LJbutterfly
All of your analytical poetry is well thought out, well written, and thought provoking. I've traveled across many rivers of time as a God fearing child of the Most High God. Your poetic lines that best describe what I've learned, "Content, I watch as years speed by, some spent on peaks, some deserts dry." Beautiful!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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All of your analytical poetry is well thought out, well written, and thought provoking. I've traveled across many rivers of time as a God fearing child of the Most High God. Your poetic lines that best describe what I've learned, "Content, I watch as years speed by, some spent on peaks, some deserts dry." Beautiful!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Terry Broxson
A very well-done poem. I particularly like the third verse. Your analysis of time is presented with excellent imagery. The fourth verse is good food for thought. The first two lines are thought-provoking. Even without faith, could trust still be viable. Your notes as always are valuable. Good job!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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A very well-done poem. I particularly like the third verse. Your analysis of time is presented with excellent imagery. The fourth verse is good food for thought. The first two lines are thought-provoking. Even without faith, could trust still be viable. Your notes as always are valuable. Good job!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Terry, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very beautiful, true and well written poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Roy, This is a very beautiful, true and well written poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks Teri, for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Ulla
Hi Roy, this is a timeless poem which shows us how time passes whether we want or not. Maybe there is a force from above, but you know my belief on that. It's a beautifully.written poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Hi Roy, this is a timeless poem which shows us how time passes whether we want or not. Maybe there is a force from above, but you know my belief on that. It's a beautifully.written poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Ulla, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from rspoet
Hello Roy,
One of your finer poems in my opinion.
The rhymes and meter are spot on and the theme
is very well presented.
Marvelous description, as in:
"My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes."
Clearly indicate there is no truth in your recent poem
"Oh Me of little Brain."
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Hello Roy,
One of your finer poems in my opinion.
The rhymes and meter are spot on and the theme
is very well presented.
Marvelous description, as in:
"My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes."
Clearly indicate there is no truth in your recent poem
"Oh Me of little Brain."
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Heh heh, thanks Robert for the fabulous observations, and very kind assessment, of my "brain" I like it, blessings Roy
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Roy a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. There isn't much I can say about your work that I haven't already said. Your words are always so heartfelt and inspirational, thanks for sharing with us. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Hello Roy a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. There isn't much I can say about your work that I haven't already said. Your words are always so heartfelt and inspirational, thanks for sharing with us. Have a great day!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Aussie
Well done Roy. Anxiety is sufficient for the day thereof. My favourite two lines; my life's contained in timeless climes. Not the realms of clock-borne chimes. We are safe in His loving arms. They can kill our bodies, our souls belong to Jesus. K xx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Well done Roy. Anxiety is sufficient for the day thereof. My favourite two lines; my life's contained in timeless climes. Not the realms of clock-borne chimes. We are safe in His loving arms. They can kill our bodies, our souls belong to Jesus. K xx
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thanks Kay, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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The final war has begun. I am so looking forward to going home. K xx
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Me too
Comment from Artasylum
Another beautiful, inspirational read...
to everything there is a season, and a time for every and a time to every purpose under Heaven... turn, turn, turn... My absolute favorite... I would like to move into that phrase and let it wash God's love over me... yours, di
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Another beautiful, inspirational read...
to everything there is a season, and a time for every and a time to every purpose under Heaven... turn, turn, turn... My absolute favorite... I would like to move into that phrase and let it wash God's love over me... yours, di
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks Di, for your empathetic comments and a thoughtful review blessings Roy
