Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

". . . awake, alive, grateful . . ." Sounds like what all of us should be. Thankful for the simplest of things, the air we breathe, the radiance of the sun, food to nourish our bodies, and any inkling of hope. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2022

Comment from Marienkiefer

Excellent

Each word is precise in meaning, beauty and grace.
Economy of words, each of the eight well chosen for impact.
So few words embrace emotion, time, location.
Lovely poem.

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A beautiful scene.
-You have used your 8 words well,
and I like the "mood you conjured up."
-Good topic and descriptive adjectives.
-I would feel the same way looking at
that scene.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

Comment from LisaMay

Exceptional

This is superb. I love the photo (our Southern Lights where I live in NZ can be very impressive). Your strong words are expressively life-affirming and positive.
Your posting looks like a winner to me.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022

Hey kiddo... I am so sorry for taking so long to get back to you with much gratitude for the six plus review... I'm caring for my 100 year-old Father-in-Law... we have been squaring him away in an assisted living facility... so again, thanks for your wonderful review... yours, di

reply by LisaMay on 03-Mar-2022

No need to apologise.... I hope your father-in-law settles in well. I understand about caring for an elderly family member.
I'd hoped more people would vote for your lovely entry.