Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Excellent

I'm gonna give you 5 cause you're writing to came alive keep up the good work stay dedicated short and sweet to the point you did your job that's all this counts wish you well in a competition

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Thanks for the positive feedback ...I prefer this format or 5-7-5 because one, as you say, must be sweet to the point. I see it as a challenge.

Glad you found the the theme interesting.

The rhino , elephant , tiger and many other beautiful creatures are on the endangered list..it would be very sad if our children could see these wild animals only in a zoo.

Take care!

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

This is an issue close to my heart. I am a conservationist with a deep love for nature and am distressed by the threat to our magnificent animals, especially endangered species, for trophy hunting and 'medicinal purposes' that are provably false... just as your information states. Thank you for being an animal rights activist with this poem.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Glad my wee poem made an impression on you...

if poaching continues animals like the rhino and elephant in a decade will no more roam freely...our children will have to go to the zoo to see a handful of these magnificent creatures left ..it's a crime.

We seemed to be adamant to destroy the beauty God gave us.