Comment from jaded831

Exceptional

Perfect, I have to read them all, but I really enjoyed the read. If you don't force yourself to come out of the grief state, your life remains stagnant, and you never grow. I think you got a winner here.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022

Wow! Thank you so much for the six stars and your great words of encouragement. It is very appreciated. Hugs.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This entry for the 1-6-1 Contest writing prompt obeys the contest requirement with a full set of line-end rhymes. These are unforced and have good connectivity, so flow is ensured.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022

Thank you for your comments and review of my poem. I appreciate your time and kind words. Hugs.

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Good poem for the contest. The poem has an underlying honesty to it. Steals peace with no relief shows the stark reality of loss and grief. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Thank you. I appreciate your encouraging review.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

So true, and so very well thought out, grief does steal all our peaceful thoughts and stops us from thinking of of better times, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. It's much appreciated.

Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Good

Thank you for sharing this short and sweet piece I wish you well in a competition thanks again for sharing my friend keep up the good work stay bless And creative

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Thank you for reading and reviewing my contest entry. Hugs.