Comment from TPAC

Excellent

I like the thought. Too
, bad the usage of s-it wasn't played, enjoying your refreshing viewpoint better. Or even better "wit" in another ideal. All statements made in my given opinion.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022

Thanks, TPAC

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Through these mere eight required syllables, you have conveyed a powerful message. My father started smoking long before the Surgeon General's warning came out in 1964--smoked for fifty years, then quit, cold turkey.

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022

Good for him. Thanks, Janice.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I hate stinky smoking with a passion, so your poem spoke to me. It's a disgusting habit - a messy waste of money that inflicts health damage. Your poem is a strong encouragement to finish with this addiction.

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022

Thanks, LisaMay