The Pessimist
I am not Perfect contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Rebel Jim
I'm really impressed with your poem...
It cuts to the chase, right to the bone!
Don't see any flaws with your penmanship...
My compliments... Well done as far as I'm concerned.
Keep on Writin'!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I'm really impressed with your poem...
It cuts to the chase, right to the bone!
Don't see any flaws with your penmanship...
My compliments... Well done as far as I'm concerned.
Keep on Writin'!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Jim. I was just in one of those moods. Lol. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.
Comment from karenina
Every word elicits compassion. Each phrase A confession of imperfections. You speak of pessimism, and echo down a dark hallway, cracking open doors, so we can understand your perception. Profound, really.
The final lines of your poem are riveting!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Every word elicits compassion. Each phrase A confession of imperfections. You speak of pessimism, and echo down a dark hallway, cracking open doors, so we can understand your perception. Profound, really.
The final lines of your poem are riveting!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the awesome review, Karenina. I really appreciate the generous stars. I think i will go back and take the author notes out. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Thank you again.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You shall not win but praise from me which means absolutely nothing.
So many review for the points,as I do too, but I try to review every piece in a contest for I see it a reflection of life. The rich get richer. The poor stay poor. The way these contest are reminds me of the story regarding PAYOLA in the recording industry vs radio station that played songs only if graft was paid.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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You shall not win but praise from me which means absolutely nothing.
So many review for the points,as I do too, but I try to review every piece in a contest for I see it a reflection of life. The rich get richer. The poor stay poor. The way these contest are reminds me of the story regarding PAYOLA in the recording industry vs radio station that played songs only if graft was paid.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Tom. Yes, the whole world is like this. We can't get away from it. It's everywhere. I really appreciate the generous stars and great review, friend. Thank you again.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Love the picture went with the words very emotional written thank you again for sharing this you unique and captivating read you are very politic people
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Love the picture went with the words very emotional written thank you again for sharing this you unique and captivating read you are very politic people
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the great review, GGG. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from LisaMay
Virtual 6. What a 'perfect' portrayal of pessimism... I loved how you shot down everyone's motives for writing reviews, their feel-good attitudes of faith, love, beauty and hope. I hope you don't die alone, I say optimistically.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Virtual 6. What a 'perfect' portrayal of pessimism... I loved how you shot down everyone's motives for writing reviews, their feel-good attitudes of faith, love, beauty and hope. I hope you don't die alone, I say optimistically.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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LoL. Thank you for the great review and big six offer, Lisa. I intended to make this humorous when I started but it just went its own way. LoL. I'm glad you liked the piece, L. Thank you again.
