Afraid
Be still and trust......16 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
God gives not a spirit of fear, but of a sound mind. I don't remember the exact words from that scripture, but that's the idea of it. You've captured that here. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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God gives not a spirit of fear, but of a sound mind. I don't remember the exact words from that scripture, but that's the idea of it. You've captured that here. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your lovely comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a nice poem with the perfect picture. I think there are times when God cries with us or for us. It is sad to see a child in such distress. Prayer is a comfort.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is a nice poem with the perfect picture. I think there are times when God cries with us or for us. It is sad to see a child in such distress. Prayer is a comfort.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Have a great weekend, Carol!.....Maria
Comment from tfawcus
Faith and trust. Two cornerstones of religion that help to get us through hard times. A very good combination of artwork and poetry here. Well done. Good luck in the Lune contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Faith and trust. Two cornerstones of religion that help to get us through hard times. A very good combination of artwork and poetry here. Well done. Good luck in the Lune contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Tony, for this excellent review and your
exceptional comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from Jane Jane King
Hi.
That is a powerful poem.
It sends a strong message and the artwork is spot on.
The wording is fine, but I might change it a little.
Here's a sample.
Fear not for you are
Enfolded
In God's loving arms
Anyway, it's a fine piece of writing.Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Hi.
That is a powerful poem.
It sends a strong message and the artwork is spot on.
The wording is fine, but I might change it a little.
Here's a sample.
Fear not for you are
Enfolded
In God's loving arms
Anyway, it's a fine piece of writing.Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind words.
Thank you also for your lovely suggestions.
Have a great week!....Maria
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a lovely lune for the contest, and it has a great message of faith. Your syllable counts are right on, and the touching picture fits your words well. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This is a lovely lune for the contest, and it has a great message of faith. Your syllable counts are right on, and the touching picture fits your words well. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your
kind words. Have a great week!....Maria
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You're welcome, Maria. Have a blessed week also. Carol
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The words are well chosen but do addicts ever think God is listening?
If not, trust has no issue with them, right? ..............................................................................................................
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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The words are well chosen but do addicts ever think God is listening?
If not, trust has no issue with them, right? ..............................................................................................................
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the excellent review and your interesting comments.
When addicts surrender their addiction, believe in something greater then themselves, many times God, a lot of addicts begin to trust. This is when they may start believing God is listening.
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Thanks for the work done.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The picture is beautiful and fits perfect with your poem. It is short and sweet. It tells a great story, in a few lines of poetry. Thank you for the post. I enjoyed reading your poem. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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The picture is beautiful and fits perfect with your poem. It is short and sweet. It tells a great story, in a few lines of poetry. Thank you for the post. I enjoyed reading your poem. Have a great day.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi Carolyn, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
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You also, Thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
The compassionate empathy of our Lord is portrayed beautifully in the illustration, and your words show that comfort can be found through prayer. Simply put and very effective.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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The compassionate empathy of our Lord is portrayed beautifully in the illustration, and your words show that comfort can be found through prayer. Simply put and very effective.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi Lisa, Thanks so much for the excellent review and your lovely
comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from bhogg
We'll written and beautifully presented. Swell thought out post, strong message in few words. Best of luck in your contest. Oops, it enough characters.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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We'll written and beautifully presented. Swell thought out post, strong message in few words. Best of luck in your contest. Oops, it enough characters.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great
comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a beautiful poem with a sentiment that is heartfelt. I live the image you chose. It's appropriate and elevates your writing. The green background works as well.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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What a beautiful poem with a sentiment that is heartfelt. I live the image you chose. It's appropriate and elevates your writing. The green background works as well.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments. Have a great week!.....Maria
