Seeds of devotion
Sow deeply my soul3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you have your first vote!
Without passion life is colourless..with out warmth.
People who don't have a passion end up just doing what society tells or excepts them to do.
Some people have passion for their job and want to have success and a career. Nothing wrong with that.
Others have passion for an art ..
We all have a passion , big or small, but lots don't cultivate it .
We all should carve out time for oneself and enjoy our passion ..something that interest us and makes us happy doing, because it's food for the soul.
You made the most out of your 11 syllables and you even got some rhyme too , which is alway sweet to the ear!
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Ciao poet, you have your first vote!
Without passion life is colourless..with out warmth.
People who don't have a passion end up just doing what society tells or excepts them to do.
Some people have passion for their job and want to have success and a career. Nothing wrong with that.
Others have passion for an art ..
We all have a passion , big or small, but lots don't cultivate it .
We all should carve out time for oneself and enjoy our passion ..something that interest us and makes us happy doing, because it's food for the soul.
You made the most out of your 11 syllables and you even got some rhyme too , which is alway sweet to the ear!
Keep safe!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Hey there,
Yes passion
What have I to say about passion. I feel I'm one of those people who are yet to realize their passion.
I long for passion.
I'm very curious and interested in pretty much everything. The intricacies of biological life, the inanimate things like crystals and rocks, minerals.
It's all so intriguing.
And consciousness, I'm so amazed at the feeling of being alive. To have the consciousness to ponder out existence in this arena we call the universe - very cool:)
I day I don't have a passion but maybe my passion is life :))
I'm hoping for at least a third place in this one so I have enough credits to buy my way into another one. I only have .34 cents right now hah!
Thank you if you voted for me. I need all the help I can get.
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Oh mamma !..I just checked ..you won third place and on your own too.
Your piggy bank must be fuller now...(biggrin)
You are very curious and nature and her complexities intrigue you.
You do also have a lot going on in your life , 3 big responsibilities so most of your energy is channeled towards your kids.
By the end of the day , I m sure you are exhausted.
I can see you have a passion for poetry...I don t remember ...has writing been something you have always done even as a teen?
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your required eleven syllables are effectively used in this dramatically descriptive piece, personifying "passion" as a living thing getting a firm hold with power, like talons,
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Your required eleven syllables are effectively used in this dramatically descriptive piece, personifying "passion" as a living thing getting a firm hold with power, like talons,
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Many thanks for reviewing :)
Comment from Wanderlust53
Well written. I must say I love the talons that grip almost too much. I seem to have waining passions in some areas of and I yearn for them to bring me back to joy!!!!
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Well written. I must say I love the talons that grip almost too much. I seem to have waining passions in some areas of and I yearn for them to bring me back to joy!!!!
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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I don't seem to feel 'passion' for anything. I wish I did. I want those talons to grip me. I think I have an attention deficit disorder or something - nothing holds my attention long enough to become passion,
Hah! Oh well, never say never :)
Thanks for reviewing..
