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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is a lovely tribute to your Dad, Hopefully, many will be able to identify with your honoring him. Sadly, many may not, as a result of having an absent father, controlling father or no father. Nicely expressed.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    The conversation between a father and his son.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Liz O'Neill on 18-Feb-2022
    ***hugs***
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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Another great piece of your work. As stated, you are a great writer. Keep up the great work. Your words bring out the emotions and touch the heart and soul. Good Luck, once again. I hope, you win the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Well thanks for your review and thanks for you wishing me to win the contest that I didn't enter.
    Just because you state that and that I'm a great writer doesn't mean that you're a great reviewer.
    Most of my work is lengthy, hence there is plenty to talk about
    I would suggest next time that you not just look at the title that you read the entire thing including the editor's notes.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from juliaSjames
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So very sorry for your loss. May your beloved son continue to rest in eternal peace.

This is a heart wrenching. series of poems. But at the same time it is a poem of hope.

If I remember the Biblical quote correctly

"Now we see through a glass darkly, but then face to face"

Thank you for sharing.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Even though it's been going on 19 years next month.
    I still draw an amazing amount of presence and power from my son.
    And, I realized the blessings I've been bestowed.
    Has a lot has to do with him!
    Normally when I get into the month of March I post quite a lot of books and I also post quite a lot of dedications and there's also a lot of pain.
    The final one will be April Fool's Day.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by juliaSjames on 17-Feb-2022
    I understand
    Blessings

    Julia