imaginative passion
3-5-3 poem entry4 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 Passion
Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is lovely. I love the frog and the girl picture.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 Passion
Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is lovely. I love the frog and the girl picture.
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Gypsy,
Sometimes those kisses do work out LOL. Voters did not support your compliment.
Mark
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Marco!
In the original fairytale, written by the Grimm brothers , surprise !!!
.. there is no kiss at all but rather a palace wall on which the princess throws the annoying frog ..
Immediately though, she regrets/ feels remorse and that breaks the spell.
The version I know is the one with the kiss ; a princess loses her ball in a well and for a kiss a talking frog will retrieve it.
The two royals are destined to fall in love and many passionate kisses will certainly follow to seal their love story.
It's a sweet poem and I love the bright artwork !
Stay safe !
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Ciao Marco!
In the original fairytale, written by the Grimm brothers , surprise !!!
.. there is no kiss at all but rather a palace wall on which the princess throws the annoying frog ..
Immediately though, she regrets/ feels remorse and that breaks the spell.
The version I know is the one with the kiss ; a princess loses her ball in a well and for a kiss a talking frog will retrieve it.
The two royals are destined to fall in love and many passionate kisses will certainly follow to seal their love story.
It's a sweet poem and I love the bright artwork !
Stay safe !
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Tempeste,
I thought this was good enough to get more votes for my entry. Regardless your comments and support are still very much appreciated.
Mark
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a tremendous Thursday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 3-5-3 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Hello mystery poet a tremendous Thursday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 3-5-3 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks Thirteen on your Thursday review!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with good connection in the first two lines
and a solid reflective third line.
Nice play on the old fairy tale,
passion can made all the difference.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with good connection in the first two lines
and a solid reflective third line.
Nice play on the old fairy tale,
passion can made all the difference.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks Robert! Pleased you recognized that fairy tale allusion.
