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A Quiver of Cobras

Unwelcomed bedfellows that quiver in the night

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Comment from kiwisteveh
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New Zealand has no snakes of any kind - thank goodness! However, I did come across a cobra once when living in Singapore. I kept my distance!

I enjoyed your short acrostic poem and I note the skill to get rhyme in there as well.

Good luck in the contest and welcome to FanStory. I hope you like it here.

Steve

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
    Help my friend,
    I have been closer where you live (east coast of Australia) I always wished I had taken some extra time to visit N.Z.
    Stay save.
    Lobber
reply by kiwisteveh on 14-Feb-2022
    Hi. I lived in Australia for a while too - near the canefields in far north Queensland where snakes are rife, Thankfully we saw very few around our property.

    I can promote NZ as a wonderful place to visit - mountains, lakes, beaches, friendly people. sadly we are closed at the moment. Hopefully that will be fixed soon.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is a great Acrostic! I'm not a huge fan of snakes, and the words you so wonderfully put together didn't help. You are a talent for sure! Wonderful piece. It certainly gave me a Quiver, lol.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
    Hello my friend,
    ...glad I could give your body a little shake (not snake).
    Lobber