Ultimate Horror Story
What is the worst horror anyone could experience?6 total reviews
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This Poem is on fire!!! For, your skills and
creativity allowed it to keep it's mystic. Leaving
the reader wondering...and asking, who is he
talking to. Nevertheless, the nightmare stays intact,
cause of the fact that it's always One of your worst
Nightmares, to stand in front of Loved Ones, and
they not recognize you. But on the other side of the
same token, It's also a nightmare, to stand in front of
God, And He not know who you are any longer. Nice
Job. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to
me. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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This Poem is on fire!!! For, your skills and
creativity allowed it to keep it's mystic. Leaving
the reader wondering...and asking, who is he
talking to. Nevertheless, the nightmare stays intact,
cause of the fact that it's always One of your worst
Nightmares, to stand in front of Loved Ones, and
they not recognize you. But on the other side of the
same token, It's also a nightmare, to stand in front of
God, And He not know who you are any longer. Nice
Job. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to
me. Stay Connected
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you... your opinion is always a boost to my writer's ego.
Comment from AliMom
What an excellent twist on the prompt. It may well be the most horrible realization of mankind. A very sobering thought for non-believers. Congratulations on your first prize win. Well deserved.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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What an excellent twist on the prompt. It may well be the most horrible realization of mankind. A very sobering thought for non-believers. Congratulations on your first prize win. Well deserved.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you for such uplifting words! It wasn't hard to settle on this way of writing a horror story because nothing would terrify me more than to face this event and not be known. Thank you.
Comment from jessizero
This was absolutely horrifying. I literally got scared. You did a great job saying so much with so few words. I didn't think it was preachy at all.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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This was absolutely horrifying. I literally got scared. You did a great job saying so much with so few words. I didn't think it was preachy at all.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind comment.
Comment from LisaMay
Yes yes yes... that would indeed be the ultimate horror! What a thought-provoking posting... to arrive and then to feel you hadn't been invited and are therefore an awkward, unexpected nuisance. Or to feel that all your hopes have been found to be based on an incorrect belief. How ghastly!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Yes yes yes... that would indeed be the ultimate horror! What a thought-provoking posting... to arrive and then to feel you hadn't been invited and are therefore an awkward, unexpected nuisance. Or to feel that all your hopes have been found to be based on an incorrect belief. How ghastly!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Yup. When I read your description, I was already thinking ahead. 'Something with one of my kids???' Wow. Can't imagine too much worse than that, right?
But then you smacked me right in the face. You got it, and how. THAT would truly be the worst of the worst of the... can't even say it.
If the contest votes go by levels of horror -- there will be no competition. You'll win by default. Great job. Thanks.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Yup. When I read your description, I was already thinking ahead. 'Something with one of my kids???' Wow. Can't imagine too much worse than that, right?
But then you smacked me right in the face. You got it, and how. THAT would truly be the worst of the worst of the... can't even say it.
If the contest votes go by levels of horror -- there will be no competition. You'll win by default. Great job. Thanks.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind comments. I hope you are right about the "no competition" part (unless you also entered!)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a magnificent Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Hello mystery poet a magnificent Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your encouraging response. May your day be even better than my own great day.
