Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Yearning"Romantic Tanka Poems
5 total reviews
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful Tanka poem. The picture was interesting and your words were delightful because they showed the heat of the passion. I thought it was great. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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This was a wonderful Tanka poem. The picture was interesting and your words were delightful because they showed the heat of the passion. I thought it was great. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. You're one of the best reviewers in fanstory. Helen is too. I appreciate that you review all my work. It's very nice of you. I wish I could promote more but I watch my grandson and he is a handful LoL he is going through a rough patch lately, throwing tantrums and hitting. I have to remind myself he is only four. (((Sigh)))
Blessed be, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
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Oh my goodness, a four year old, that is amazing. I remember when raising my son, that several people told me that it was either the forgetful fours when they forgot everything from day to day or the fighting fours where they fought all the time. I see you have a fighting four. Take care of that little guy, one day he will grow up. Gypsy you are so very welcome. Blessed be n hugs! Yes, I know Helen very well.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and longing desire is a flame that I tried to stand my ground against, bu I turned and fled. Now I distract myself with other worries that I can't control!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and longing desire is a flame that I tried to stand my ground against, bu I turned and fled. Now I distract myself with other worries that I can't control!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback, Mike.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
Interesting poem- 5/75/7/7 count good- content -pyrotechnically, anything beyond a 'yearning' might be ill advised. Poem does a good job describing (probably) a young person with a good fantasy and above average physical desires? As in the picture.
Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Interesting poem- 5/75/7/7 count good- content -pyrotechnically, anything beyond a 'yearning' might be ill advised. Poem does a good job describing (probably) a young person with a good fantasy and above average physical desires? As in the picture.
Good job.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, AP. You are a wonderful reviewer.
Gypsy hugs
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Bless you ❤️
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I like your love and passion orientated Tanka that with ten minutes to go before valentine's day here is an exceedingly apt subject. I don't feel myself to be familiar enough with this poetry form to go around handing out six star ratings. Sorry if you feel that's a bit unfair. Kate xx
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I like your love and passion orientated Tanka that with ten minutes to go before valentine's day here is an exceedingly apt subject. I don't feel myself to be familiar enough with this poetry form to go around handing out six star ratings. Sorry if you feel that's a bit unfair. Kate xx
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Not at all, I don't expect six stars, they are a treat.
Thank you very much, Katherine. You are very kind. I appreciate your time and review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Well, this certainly is a sultry one. I wonder why the moon is "dark" and it seems only to shine a "slit" through the dusk. But the passion seems to be quite on fire!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Well, this certainly is a sultry one. I wonder why the moon is "dark" and it seems only to shine a "slit" through the dusk. But the passion seems to be quite on fire!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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The lover is gone making her sad.
Thank you very much, Helen. You are very kind. I appreciate your time and review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs