One Worn Out Worker
Working during covid48 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I suddenly thought I hadn't read anything of yours for a long time, and came over to see. It's been a while since you posted, I hope all is well with you?
This poem is heartbreaking, and I can't imagine how hard it was for you, and people like you, in those ghastly days. So many of those elderly in care died before their time, not only that, but without the comfort of their families beside them. You worked hard, without time for yourself to recover the extra load you had to take on. The trauma must have been great. I'd like to thank you for being there for all those who died alone, for all those confused and upset patients you took care of. You were an angel. Bless you heart. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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I suddenly thought I hadn't read anything of yours for a long time, and came over to see. It's been a while since you posted, I hope all is well with you?
This poem is heartbreaking, and I can't imagine how hard it was for you, and people like you, in those ghastly days. So many of those elderly in care died before their time, not only that, but without the comfort of their families beside them. You worked hard, without time for yourself to recover the extra load you had to take on. The trauma must have been great. I'd like to thank you for being there for all those who died alone, for all those confused and upset patients you took care of. You were an angel. Bless you heart. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thanks. Yes, it was tough. I think I was pretty much burnt out. Hope I did some good during that time. I'm slowly recovering. Since I turned 65 I don't have to work so much any more, but I haven't retired completely.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you and bless you for all you had to put up with in these past two years! Sorry that you had to bear more than your workload because of the sickness and fears. Hope you stayed well.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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Thank you and bless you for all you had to put up with in these past two years! Sorry that you had to bear more than your workload because of the sickness and fears. Hope you stayed well.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
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Thanks. I have been lucky enough not to get sick, but it does seem to be taking time to get my energy back. I was pretty wiped out. I'm sure I'll be okay soon.
Comment from Dawn Munro
First off, you need to know this -- I consider you to be courageous and selfless, because if it was me, I don't think I could continue to work in my chosen profession. The most risk I've taken throughout this pandemic is becoming a caregiver for an old friend who is often far more careless than I am.
That said, your poem is wonderful. It gives the reader a realistic glimpse into the day-to-day struggle our healthcare workers face. (And that, I think, is hugely important! I hope you publish this on other sites!)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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First off, you need to know this -- I consider you to be courageous and selfless, because if it was me, I don't think I could continue to work in my chosen profession. The most risk I've taken throughout this pandemic is becoming a caregiver for an old friend who is often far more careless than I am.
That said, your poem is wonderful. It gives the reader a realistic glimpse into the day-to-day struggle our healthcare workers face. (And that, I think, is hugely important! I hope you publish this on other sites!)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks. I don't feel all that brave. Sometimes I'm really scared. I just do what I have to. These vulnerable people need help, and I need to work.
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God bless you for it, my friend. Courage isn't being unafraid -- courage is doing what needs to be done despite being scared! And as for you needing to work -- there are other jobs, but you choose to do THIS one. IMO, that makes you heroic. :))
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem, what a powerful message you conveyed. Unless your in the field, no one can possibly understand the torment of doing your job day in and day out. The tears, fears and deaths. You are truly heroes and I'm thankful for you.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem, what a powerful message you conveyed. Unless your in the field, no one can possibly understand the torment of doing your job day in and day out. The tears, fears and deaths. You are truly heroes and I'm thankful for you.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thanks. I'm glad my little poem had meaning for you.
Comment from tfawcus
Few people have been unaffected by COVID, but your account drives home the huge burden that has been placed on those who nurse the elderly. An invidious position, indeed, and I'm glad you are taking steps to reduce your workload. You need to take care of yourself as much as you can. Thank you for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Few people have been unaffected by COVID, but your account drives home the huge burden that has been placed on those who nurse the elderly. An invidious position, indeed, and I'm glad you are taking steps to reduce your workload. You need to take care of yourself as much as you can. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thanks. Yes, the last couple of years have been tough. I know I have to take some time to get back to writing and a few other things I want to do, or I'm going to get sick and be no use to myself or anyone else.
Comment from Frank Malley
"lOne Worn Out Worker" presents in tetrameter the emotional roller-coaster endured by a medical worker. I think the poem would have been strengthened by using more names to identify the difficult and confused patients this worker must tend to and comfort every day; the first patient described, Addie, has an embodiment that makes her more emotionally powerful via her name.This poem very capably recreates a very hard work experience created by the current virus pandemic. The rhymes and the meter are quite perfectly realized. I would have been more move if she had employed a few more shocking descriptions to make the story related as visceral as it truly must be for a worker like this.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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"lOne Worn Out Worker" presents in tetrameter the emotional roller-coaster endured by a medical worker. I think the poem would have been strengthened by using more names to identify the difficult and confused patients this worker must tend to and comfort every day; the first patient described, Addie, has an embodiment that makes her more emotionally powerful via her name.This poem very capably recreates a very hard work experience created by the current virus pandemic. The rhymes and the meter are quite perfectly realized. I would have been more move if she had employed a few more shocking descriptions to make the story related as visceral as it truly must be for a worker like this.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thanks. Addie isn't a particular person. I have to be careful what I reveal. The more shocking descriptions could identify an individual. That would be illegal. I considered calling the second fellow Bill or John, but there are too many Bills and Johns who might think it's about them.
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I understand. If people where you work know your writing, it would be tricky.
Comment from lindafisher
There is so much despair in this well rhymed poem. We have all been affected by this monster that continues spread. There are no words to thank you and your colleagues for all you do. God bless you all.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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There is so much despair in this well rhymed poem. We have all been affected by this monster that continues spread. There are no words to thank you and your colleagues for all you do. God bless you all.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thanks. Yes, we have all been affected in some way.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This poem expresses so well the problems we have experienced for several years. Covid is a monster, stealing the security of those who don't understand their confinement, but most of all, the need for rest of those who have the burden of caring for them. Through the poem, I see your caring heart, and I appreciate your service. God bless.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This poem expresses so well the problems we have experienced for several years. Covid is a monster, stealing the security of those who don't understand their confinement, but most of all, the need for rest of those who have the burden of caring for them. Through the poem, I see your caring heart, and I appreciate your service. God bless.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thanks. Yes, Covid has been a monster. It's affected us all.
Comment from Boogienights
I just want to say that this is a wonderful rhyming poem, and I want to say thank you for hanging in there and risking yourself to help others. My son and daughter both work at hospitals and I worry everyday. Thanks for this story. :)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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I just want to say that this is a wonderful rhyming poem, and I want to say thank you for hanging in there and risking yourself to help others. My son and daughter both work at hospitals and I worry everyday. Thanks for this story. :)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thanks. And give my best to your son and daughter.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Everyone's lives were turned upside down roughly 2yr ago. I've lost three family members (not due to Covid-19) and their final transition was very much affected by the new rules. I know so many want to be done with the virus. Unfortunately, the virus isn't done with us. Almost 1million in the USA gone, and yet the selfish can't wait to hit the clubs and gyms and more. I feel for Addie and the other fellow. But most of all I feel for the Health Care Professionals who are still on the front line. Well Written, Well Done.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Everyone's lives were turned upside down roughly 2yr ago. I've lost three family members (not due to Covid-19) and their final transition was very much affected by the new rules. I know so many want to be done with the virus. Unfortunately, the virus isn't done with us. Almost 1million in the USA gone, and yet the selfish can't wait to hit the clubs and gyms and more. I feel for Addie and the other fellow. But most of all I feel for the Health Care Professionals who are still on the front line. Well Written, Well Done.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thanks for the six! I'm so sorry you lost family members during this time. The rules affect everyone with a loved one in a hospital or care home, whether or not they have covid. Here we have idiots blocking boarder crossings wanting to remove all restrictions. It's insanity. You're right, as much as we want it to be otherwise, the virus isn't done with us.
